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Just a few questions;
Which certain places you feel the swearing is to strong or out of place?
I wanted to include a little more history between Streets and Remmy, but i'm not exactly sure how, or if I'll be able to have enough time to do it. I was thinking of having a "flashback" esque scene, of a Remmy losing a lot of money to streets, getting beat up for debts he owed, etc.
Also, I would like to develop the background story behind Hatten and Streets, again though I'm not sure if I should just expand the dialoge of their first scene, or develop an entirely new scene.
Do you think its clear enough, that the money that Remmy "discovered" in the allyway, was the money that Streets was supposed to give hatten for his drug deal? I think it will turn out that way in the actual film, as the ally, and trashcan will be the same. However, I could improve on that scene as well I suppose.
Thanks for the help!
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