Stare At The Sun

Disclaimer:
First off, i've never written a script before, so, my layout of the dialoge and such is a little skewed, but I tried to keep it as well laid out as possible, regardless, you should get the general idea.

Please help me as much as you can, i'm not worried about grammar, or typo's, i'm worried about developing the chars, about the plot, about momentum, and things of that nature. Also, I need a soundtrack!!! Other little clips of songs, or music that you think would fit, whatever genre, whatever type, im open to suggestions! Thanks in advance for the help i'll get.


Synopsis:

Remmy "Two Times" is a down on his luck gambler who
happends upon 25,000 dollars, enough to get him into a
high stakes poker game. With his life turning upside
down around him, and old rivals coming into play,
Remmys life is anything but a game.

The script is a bit to long to post here, so I posted it as an attatchment. Its a .doc file, so it should open with whatever word proccessor program you have, even notepad/wordpad works fine.