I actually read all 77 (wow!) , and I can see the influence in your poem. The second stanza, I think, is the strongest one, but there seems to be enough random details to tie together a story. I'll be keeping an eye out for it!
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Calling from deep in the heart, from where the eyes can't see and the ears can't hear, from where the mountain trails end and only love can go... ~~~ Three Rivers Hare Krishna
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