KMA-628

First, the graphics look really good.

However: A few marketing suggestions, if you don't mind.

1. Too many words. You only have a few seconds to get your point across and grab interest. Try making it a little more concise.

2. Certain aspects of the event need to stand out boldly: Who, what, where and when. Make sure that is the most obvious part of the flyer. This info needs to stand out (larger text) and be easy to get from a glance (i.e. grab attention)

3. Use the website for the detailed information. It is an easy to remember website, so people shouldn't have a hard time remembering it.

4. It is a concept that should grab the attention of your target audience, so you can get away with less (way less) information and still get your point across--push the website as the best place to get more info.

5. Watch the font. In advertising you want to use easy to read fonts. The idea being that your audience won't have to work to read the ad--i.e. the word "lapdance olympics" needs to be easier to read.


just a few suggestions......

Edit: Looking at it again, you could remove 80-90% of the info and still have a sucessful flyer/ad. "Lapdance Olympics" is enough by itself to get interested parties--a lot of the other info can be cut out and kept on the website.