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The Lit thread isn't just poetry, it's anything coming from your mind that you've written down. While I don't neccessarily agree that ALL girls are the type described, your writing gives us a sense of your frustration with the girls you have dealt with. And there is poetry in your writing, especially in the "sincere as any smile, then she slapped me in the face" line. Thanks for giving me something to think about today!
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Calling from deep in the heart, from where the eyes can't see and the ears can't hear, from where the mountain trails end and only love can go... ~~~ Three Rivers Hare Krishna
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