Although, as you said Outpour, there are inconsistancies in the logic, thats what i felt was integral to the writing.
Normal when i do end up jotting these things down, there is a certain warped (or even lacking) logic to things, that one has to think about a long time before actually seeing a further message behind that.
With this particular peice, i was getting slightly bemused because i couldn't, and still can't, find the second message, which is what is starting to get at me.
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