You should be writing for you, and the words don't mean squat if you're not being honest with yourself. Poems have a great way of letting us say things we couldn't just blurt out in a conversation, but they also leave room for interpretation. The specific examples are so much the point as the overall picture they create, and you did a superb job with that. I just got sucked into your poem!
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Calling from deep in the heart, from where the eyes can't see and the ears can't hear, from where the mountain trails end and only love can go... ~~~ Three Rivers Hare Krishna
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