maleficent

I'd probably leave off the part about the car-- and that you rent a small apartment' (you're coming down too hard on yourself...) Women aren't all about money, and it sounds like you are weeding out the gold diggers, which is good, but let that info come in conversations...

Which pic are you using?

For the BTW -- flirt with it a little bit -- a kiss to the lady who can identify where the tag line is from....

Otherwise it's good...

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