Thanks maleficent and Cynthetiq, that's exactly the kind of criticism I was looking for. I'm going to work on these changes now. As well as try to tailor my resume for this specific job.
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I updated my internship section, let me know if this reads better
INTERNSHIPS:
Senator Arthur Millers Office 6/2002 to 12/2002
Acted as a constituent trouble shooter, solving constituent problems with various agencies of the government as well as Warren area businesses and non-governmental organizations
Researched bills, took notes at meetings, and acted as a intergovernmental liason for the office
Handled large mailing projects, updated voter databases, and organized campaign efforts
Recognized in front of the Senate for work throughout the year.
WDUB 91.1 FM Denison 1/1999-4/1999
Learned how to operate broadcast equipment, FCC regulations, and radio programming
Handled contests and promotions, including ticket giveaways and on-air performances
Given my own 2-hour block of time, with complete creative control of programming and content
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Convictions are more dangerous enemies of truth than lies.
Frederich Nietzsche
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