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It does depend on what level class you're in. I would never expect first-semester students to do much more stylistically than what you've done here, trashley, and wouldn't expect much more from second semester students. I usually tell my students not to try and do anything they don't know how to do; while I love it when they suceed, much more often they fail.
By way of disclaimer, my policies may or may not be those of your instructor.
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"Die Deutschen meinen, daß die Kraft sich in Härte und Grausamkeit offenbaren müsse, sie unterwerfen sich dann gerne und mit Bewunderung:[...]. Daß es Kraft giebt in der Milde und Stille, das glauben sie nicht leicht."
"The Germans believe that power must reveal itself in hardness and cruelty and then submit themselves gladly and with admiration[...]. They do not believe readily that there is power in meekness and calm."
-- Friedrich Nietzsche
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