A song I wrote for my son
 

Hi all,

Well I made a third song! The reason for the explanation point is becasue well the song took me so damn long to make lol but I did get it done ( at least I think so) My 5 year ols son Taylor loves baseball and well he uses his imagination to play it by himself. I figured why not make a song that kind of captures that while making me as an adult use my imagination as well.

I really hope you can find it tolerable :) Please feel free to let me know how it sounds.
I am so new at this still and well I understand that I make mistakes, I have no qualms with criticism, please feeel free. I really want to develope eventually one day into a good dj. so that one day when Im gone my son can put on a cd for his friends and say hey this was my dad.

Tha name of the song is Baseball Tay; let me know what you think.

Thanks

Here is the link.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/es...amal_music.htm

I think its pretty damn good. You have a good flow from beginning to end and fill the sonic space well. The drums are solid and progress in a chill way. Good work look forward to hearing more.

I can't leave without hearing this. So I'm listening now. I like the samples most of all. The clapping and cheering. I could picture a young boy bouncing around to this and having a great time. It seems you're only getting better. Good luck with this my friend. I think soon I may start on a musical journey myself. Mine is going to be a very long one though. Wish me luck!

Asta!! :thumbsup:

Thanks Guys!

K-wisw I thikn th elonger the music journey the better ;)