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optik_nerve · 01-14-2006, 08:50 AM

I just wrote these to throw into a song I had made

This is reality -- don't you fear
I'm here for you now, your saviour is here.
Skies of Darkness and shadows of hate.
We wait together and endure our fate.

Now we're together, you're in my arms.
The Seventh has sounded, one third is gone.
I'm sorry to tell you. I've let you down.
I must be going--
Even I can't save you now.

maestroxl · 01-14-2006, 04:15 PM

I like it! Especially the last lines.

rlynnm · 01-16-2006, 12:36 AM

good dose of reality....

msh58 · 01-16-2006, 12:51 AM

i'd lose the first line if it was mine. The rest of it, wow.

optik_nerve · 01-18-2006, 09:06 PM

Thanks for all the input.

01-14-2006, 08:50 AM	#1 (permalink)
optik_nerve Psycho Location: Florida	Some lyrics I had written for a song I just wrote these to throw into a song I had made This is reality -- don't you fear I'm here for you now, your saviour is here. Skies of Darkness and shadows of hate. We wait together and endure our fate. Now we're together, you're in my arms. The Seventh has sounded, one third is gone. I'm sorry to tell you. I've let you down. I must be going-- Even I can't save you now. Last edited by optik_nerve; 01-14-2006 at 08:45 PM.. Reason: Grammar issues

01-14-2006, 04:15 PM	#2 (permalink)
maestroxl buck fush Location: Tucson, AZ	I like it! Especially the last lines. __________________ be the change you want

01-16-2006, 12:36 AM	#3 (permalink)
rlynnm Psycho Location: so cal	good dose of reality.... __________________ The hardest thing is to be honest with yourself, especially if that means completely redefining the world you've come to know. Don't look too hard, I'm right in front of you.

01-16-2006, 12:51 AM	#4 (permalink)
msh58 Crazy	i'd lose the first line if it was mine. The rest of it, wow.

01-18-2006, 09:06 PM	#5 (permalink)
optik_nerve Psycho Location: Florida	Thanks for all the input.