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K-Wise · 01-09-2006, 07:32 PM

Well got some lyrics for ya. Wrote these about a week and a half to two weeks ago. They're the result of a couple of restless nights when I had a million thoughts going through my head. These are the first songs I've written that are meant to be sung. I know how they'll be sung and I can hear the music in my head. My guitar skills aren't developed enough to write music to these though (YET!). But soon they will be and I'll be performing these in Cafe's for small crowds it'll be great. Here they are.

This first one is going to have a female background vocalist singing harmonies in the chorus and in small parts throughout. It'll be done acoustic and soulfully with a hint of R&B in the style of artists like Tracy Chapman, or Blessed Union Of Souls...Or Tony Rich Project...yeah. I think it will sound really nice some day. Maybe a little piano too.

The second will probably be your typical bluesy soft acoustic style with light electric guitar harmonies like bends and maybe some strings or piano. Not sure yet but pretty simple and nothing too overproduced.

<center>Let Go, Don't Wait
By: Cristian Rios</center>

I know when it hurts
how it burns
when youve got so much love, yearns
and no one to share it with
So you give it away
And hope it gets returned

(Chorus)
There there... its all...right
Some girls just dont know...
Whats good for them
We never really say what we meant... to

Let go...
Maybe theyll come back, or maybe youll let someone else

Love YOU...

Where does it go? Makes no sense
How can they love you one day,
but not the next?
Maybe they never did or maybe its just that
We never really say what we meant... to

Dont wait...
Maybe that someone really does...

Love...you...

What could be worse than not knowing? (4x)

(Chorus)

<center>My Love Lay Here
By: Cristian Rios</center>

I cant sleep so I sit here restless
Because my love lay here last night
A love who doesnt love me
And if she wasnt so lovely
I might actually give up the fight

My love lay here... goodnight
I guess Ill just cry myself to sleep

See, Im a man who loves with no hope
always hoping
For some kind of chance that life never grants;
Alone with my romance and heart broken...

I lay by my love with a love never spoken
I guess Ill just cry myself to sleep

See, Im a man who loves all the wrong people
for all the right reasons
But always believing I might die alone
Is just...not... a good... feeling
I guess Ill just Ill just cry myself to sleep

I dont know whats wrong with me but maybe in time Ill know why

Watched as my love layed here... goodnight

Well I hope you enjoyed these and got something out of them. It's why I write them. Lemme know what you think. Take care and thanks for reading!

- Cris

Asta!!

K-Wise · 02-13-2006, 06:02 PM

Hmm. No replies after 21 views. I think I should get at least ONE c'mon now

.

UPPIN!

Asta!!

Fly · 02-13-2006, 07:14 PM

Asta dude.........you got any music for them words?

do you play your guitar and sing 'em at the same time?

keep goin' brother.............don't stop

K-Wise · 02-13-2006, 08:07 PM

Nope only in my head. Not good enough to play them YET but I will be soon enough(hopefully). Then I'll sing and play em at the same time. That'll take a while though...I hear it's difficult to do both.

Got some more lyrics I wrote last night. I'll put em up when this one gets a lil more love

Thanks for readin man!

Asta!!

Stillborn · 02-19-2006, 10:09 PM

Good stuff, man.

K-Wise · 02-21-2006, 06:36 AM

Thanx dude

Asta!!

jwoody · 03-08-2006, 06:42 AM

I'm sure sombody here can help you out with some music and, with the song writing credits, you'll get to keep the lions share of the millions.

Do an album cover of you standing on a beach somewhere, looking all moody and shit, you'll have chicks all over you like a rash.

I'm fuckin tellin ya.

edit: got to be a black & white album cover

edit 2: unbutton your shirt and put your hands in your pockets.

K-Wise · 03-09-2006, 06:21 AM

ahahaha thats funny shit. I've always thought of an album cover. I think I'll do some piece of artwork like a drawing or really good photograph perhaps. My guitar skills are coming along pretty good just need more time is all haha. I got plenty I'm young

Asta!!

01-09-2006, 07:32 PM	#1 (permalink)
K-Wise It's All About The Ass!! Location: In a pool of mayonnaise!!	Some lyrics I wrote recently Well got some lyrics for ya. Wrote these about a week and a half to two weeks ago. They're the result of a couple of restless nights when I had a million thoughts going through my head. These are the first songs I've written that are meant to be sung. I know how they'll be sung and I can hear the music in my head. My guitar skills aren't developed enough to write music to these though (YET!). But soon they will be and I'll be performing these in Cafe's for small crowds it'll be great. Here they are. This first one is going to have a female background vocalist singing harmonies in the chorus and in small parts throughout. It'll be done acoustic and soulfully with a hint of R&B in the style of artists like Tracy Chapman, or Blessed Union Of Souls...Or Tony Rich Project...yeah. I think it will sound really nice some day. Maybe a little piano too. The second will probably be your typical bluesy soft acoustic style with light electric guitar harmonies like bends and maybe some strings or piano. Not sure yet but pretty simple and nothing too overproduced. <center><b>Let Go, Don't Wait By: Cristian Rios</b></center> <i>I know when it hurts how it burns when youve got so much love, yearns and no one to share it with So you give it away And hope it gets returned <b>(Chorus)</b> There there... its all...right Some girls just dont know... Whats good for them We never really say what we meant... to Let go... Maybe theyll come back, or maybe youll let someone else Love <U>YOU</U>... Where does it go? Makes no sense How can they love you one day, but not the next? Maybe they never did or maybe its just that We never really say what we meant... to Dont wait... Maybe that someone really does... Love...<U>you</U>... What could be worse than not knowing? (4x) <b>(Chorus)</b></i> <center><b>My Love Lay Here By: Cristian Rios</b></center> <i>I cant sleep so I sit here restless Because my love lay here last night A love who doesnt love me And if she wasnt so lovely I might actually give up the fight My love lay here... goodnight I guess Ill just cry myself to sleep See, Im a man who loves with no hope always hoping For some kind of chance that life never grants; Alone with my romance and heart broken... I lay by my love with a love never spoken I guess Ill just cry myself to sleep See, Im a man who loves all the wrong people for all the right reasons But always believing I might die alone Is just...not... a good... feeling I guess Ill just Ill just cry myself to sleep I dont know whats wrong with me but maybe in time Ill know why Watched as my love layed here... goodnight</i> Well I hope you enjoyed these and got something out of them. It's why I write them. Lemme know what you think. Take care and thanks for reading! - Cris Asta!! __________________ "I love music and it's my parents fault (closing statement)." - Me..quoting myself...from when I said that...On TFP..thats here...Tilted Forum Project *It ain't goodbye, it's see ya later! I'll miss you guys!* - Asta!!

02-13-2006, 06:02 PM	#2 (permalink)
K-Wise It's All About The Ass!! Location: In a pool of mayonnaise!!	Hmm. No replies after 21 views. I think I should get at least ONE c'mon now . UPPIN! Asta!! __________________ "I love music and it's my parents fault (closing statement)." - Me..quoting myself...from when I said that...On TFP..thats here...Tilted Forum Project *It ain't goodbye, it's see ya later! I'll miss you guys!* - Asta!!

02-13-2006, 07:14 PM	#3 (permalink)
Fly see the links to my music? Location: Beautiful British Columbia	Asta dude.........you got any music for them words? do you play your guitar and sing 'em at the same time? keep goin' brother.............don't stop __________________ BASTARD SterlingStudios

02-13-2006, 08:07 PM	#4 (permalink)
K-Wise It's All About The Ass!! Location: In a pool of mayonnaise!!	Nope only in my head. Not good enough to play them YET but I will be soon enough(hopefully). Then I'll sing and play em at the same time. That'll take a while though...I hear it's difficult to do both. Got some more lyrics I wrote last night. I'll put em up when this one gets a lil more love Thanks for readin man! Asta!! __________________ "I love music and it's my parents fault (closing statement)." - Me..quoting myself...from when I said that...On TFP..thats here...Tilted Forum Project *It ain't goodbye, it's see ya later! I'll miss you guys!* - Asta!!

02-19-2006, 10:09 PM	#5 (permalink)
Stillborn Tilted Location: Dingden, DE / Centennial, CO	Good stuff, man. __________________ Waiting... to be born again Wanting... the saddest kind of pain Waiting for the day when I will crawl away

02-21-2006, 06:36 AM	#6 (permalink)
K-Wise It's All About The Ass!! Location: In a pool of mayonnaise!!	Thanx dude Asta!! __________________ "I love music and it's my parents fault (closing statement)." - Me..quoting myself...from when I said that...On TFP..thats here...Tilted Forum Project *It ain't goodbye, it's see ya later! I'll miss you guys!* - Asta!!

03-08-2006, 06:42 AM	#7 (permalink)
jwoody Shackle Me Not Location: Newcastle - England.	I'm sure sombody here can help you out with some music and, with the song writing credits, you'll get to keep the lions share of the millions. Do an album cover of you standing on a beach somewhere, looking all moody and shit, you'll have chicks all over you like a rash. I'm fuckin tellin ya. edit: got to be a black & white album cover edit 2: unbutton your shirt and put your hands in your pockets. __________________ .

03-09-2006, 06:21 AM	#8 (permalink)
K-Wise It's All About The Ass!! Location: In a pool of mayonnaise!!	ahahaha thats funny shit. I've always thought of an album cover. I think I'll do some piece of artwork like a drawing or really good photograph perhaps. My guitar skills are coming along pretty good just need more time is all haha. I got plenty I'm young Asta!! __________________ "I love music and it's my parents fault (closing statement)." - Me..quoting myself...from when I said that...On TFP..thats here...Tilted Forum Project *It ain't goodbye, it's see ya later! I'll miss you guys!* - Asta!!