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06-29-2003, 03:38 PM
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Junkie
Location: The Kitchen
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Lots of great Haiku here, there's a seperate term for poems that fit the 5-7-5 form, but don't use seasonal references, I just can't remember it right now. That being said here are a few of mine:
I'll just lay my head on a grassy pillow and watch the clouds pass (yeah the second line has 6 syllables, sometimes you have to sacrifice rules for beauty) Skeletons of trees give to the october wind Winter's coming soon If I told Basho how much I hated nature he'd kick my ass hard (Basho was the first haiku poet) |
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07-14-2003, 09:13 AM
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My future is coming on
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Location: east of the sun and west of the moon
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birds on the feeder
blissful little featherbrains how i envy them *** what dark hole is this that eats light and belches tears give us back our joy *** tangled green branches twined like lovers' raptured limbs it is not fall yet *** Strawberries and cream? Yesterday grief, tomorrow grief. Enjoy today.
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07-15-2003, 05:36 AM
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Psycho
Location: that place with the thing
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metal, smacking me
upside the head. blackness. pain. i am being mugged. breaks personal rule, but ah well
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07-17-2003, 09:25 PM
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Go Ninja, Go Ninja Go!!
Location: IN, USA
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I Am The "Nice Guy"
They Say, 'Nice Guys Finish Last'.... When Will The Race End? Its Our Hidden Gift. We All Have One True Purpose, Z, You Have Found Yours. My New Computer. Finally We May Rejoice! It Shall Be Built SOON! My Haiku Title. Somtimes It Is My First Line. I Think It Is Neat. Good Night! and Farewell! I Have Work In The Morning... So Now I Must Sleep.
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07-17-2003, 10:32 PM
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Crazy
Location: right behind you...
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10-28-2003, 09:23 AM
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cookie
Location: in the backwoods
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Surely you've seen these
Some are good, some not so good rules schmules, still funny http://tfproject.org/tfp/showthread....threadid=20748 writing haikus-fun making them literary is not so much fun! Last edited by dy156; 10-28-2003 at 09:26 AM.. |
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10-29-2003, 12:29 AM
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Insane
Location: Tucson
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last moments of life
a leaf clings then falls to earth to be born anew
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01-29-2004, 03:45 PM
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Jesus Freak
Location: Following the light...
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I'd post mine here, but I'd rather just post them in my literature thread "One Night" along with everything else I write.
I have a thing for haikus as well. When I write one, it takes me hours to work it out to where it has the right words, sounds, and meaning.
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02-02-2004, 09:18 PM
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Psycho
Location: the western part of new york
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i dont like the drugs
they mayke me feel like woozy dont send in the clowns
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02-04-2004, 10:57 PM
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Insane
Location: Land of milk and honey - Wisconsin
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I've got my own thread of haiku, but I figured a community effort might be appreciated...
Stillness abounding Dripping silence of spring rain Purity anew
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05-01-2005, 05:50 PM
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Heliotrope
Location: A warm room
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Opening old thread
Haiku I cannot resist Is this called a bump? I found a series of haiku I wrote last year I thought I would share. When I get upset With myself for being late Love brings me ice cream Nick is drunk again Tonight he hugs a bucket Leaves for Europe soon Escape from prison Only for a little while But god, it’s worth it And Pink Floyd had screamed “The worms ate into his brain” As the wall fell down Threw the sky away I didn’t wish to see it Now I miss the sun Clock ticks overhead Pen taps against blank pages Another test failed She dances with stars A nebulaic dancer That will not come down graceful faeries dannce upon waterlily beds a moonlit ballroom Inside Joke giant spiders prey on little girls drinking tea mongoose saves the day Bacardi Breezers It only takes two For me to tell a stranger How I look naked. |
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05-04-2005, 05:48 PM
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Addict
Location: Land of the puny, wimpy states
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In tilted nonsense
the haiku are silliest no credit for posts (ah, so what, I dig silly)
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