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my first poetry post...
Perhaps I'll begin with a haiku:
Gratification Oily wet between our legs Burning like a coal And some freeform: fumble, fumble words without meaning seep through my lips and call themselves verse tit tat of diversion crawling into my mouth overwhelming my brain and spewing its false credits out the tips of these nimble fingers |
Gratification
Oily wet between our legs Burning like a coal OK.....Now I'm all horny......Damn |
I like them both, a lot. The second one is especially cool, I like the idea of poetry going through the mouth, to the brain instead of the more typical vision of brain to mouth.
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I really like the haiku. In other words... it made me tingly. However, is "oily" really the right word there? Coals and oil are kind of a weird combination of imagery.
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