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Thaw
Thaw
Raise the whip as i wish to feel something beyond this enduring numbness The sting it brings and the heat that follows are all that can melt these layers of frost At last in pain i can feel alive not dead with heartache So raise it higher and let it crack through the cold burning out my sorrow. |
Deliciously provacative.
A good visionary. Nice work. |
This is the work where your true voice seems to really come through. The desperation for emotion that always lies under the deadening effect of depression.
"So raise it higher / and let it crack" - excellent |
*soft smile*... thank you... i appreciate your comments... good or bad... it's the best way to learn and evolve...
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Good imagery, it had my cringing.
I also like the emotions it evokes. Thanks :) |
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