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Old 08-18-2005, 10:51 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Location: Oregon
Mom

Mom



First off I love you
No one can change that
Im your son
I will never forget what you have done
The love, The years, Even the pain
Been through alot together
I now understand the sacrifice you made
To raise this young man
And for that I think you

Between you and me
The love has always been there
Seeing eye to eye
You have my back I had yours
Because of that the love was always strong
Never ending.

You have my upmost respect
Mom if I could give you the world I would
You probly wouldnt take it
You probly would tell me to keep it for myself
Mom I still promiss if I ever make it
All still buy you that Jaguar

Mom you are my lite
Tought me to be strong at a young age
For that Im still alive and made it though it all
Able to hold you up when you needed it
Mom your the reasion im ambisus
Wanting to grow into a Dad some day
Making you a Grandma
The will bring tears to us both

I reamber the days with out a Dad
There where alot of qestions
You never told me lies
There was always the pain
But you played Mom and Dad
thought me how to throw a ball
thought me how to change my oil
Tightin the chain on my bike
Fix my GI Joes
And most of All
Thought me how to be a Man
And for that Mom

I LOVE YOU

Your son.....
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Old 08-19-2005, 03:22 AM   #2 (permalink)
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That was extremely well done....you managed to put the feeling many of us have for her into words...beautiful

Thank You
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Old 08-22-2005, 01:43 PM   #3 (permalink)
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xray, sounds like you have a lovely mom and that you realize how lucky you are.
Very nice expression of a mother and son relationship.
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Old 08-22-2005, 07:14 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Thanks guys
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