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06-02-2003, 10:31 PM
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Insane
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Not really a free verse poem - that's a haiku I believe.
Either way, I like it. Is the chronic longing in the winner, or the losers? It works much better if the winner, despite having won, still feels a chronic longing. The dissatisfaction of competition/victory. |
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06-14-2003, 05:18 PM
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Upright
Location: in the woods
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don't know whether i am obtuse to wonder at the spelling of obscene
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the days run over the hills like wild horses...-Bukowsky- i am the flying rodeo clown of death in qpids liberation army... lending my strange services in the noble cause of taking over the world before microsoft enslaves us all. |
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