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06-03-2003, 11:58 AM
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Banned
Location: central USA
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Haiku thread anyone?
While i usually detest writing poetry within rules and contraints... i admit to having a strange love affair with Haiku.
just wondering if there are any others out there like me... and anyone who might be interesting in sharing... for a general overview of the most basic Haiku "rules" click here http://www.rit.edu/~dpalyka/Haiku.html#howtowritehaiku that said... on to the Haiku...  _____ young flowers blossom rain falls nourishing the earth life is all around _____ any takers? |
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06-03-2003, 03:56 PM
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Banned
Location: central USA
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this breaks the "try not to use personal pronouns rule"... but i wrote it for Willow... so i wanted to share...
*stupid gushy smile* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In quiet places your voice finds me, filling up the empty spaces ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Last edited by ~springrain; 06-03-2003 at 03:59 PM.. |
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06-03-2003, 03:57 PM
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Go Ninja, Go Ninja Go!!
Location: IN, USA
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Does GakFace Like Poems?
Not Really, But Then Again... I Do Like Haikus
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06-03-2003, 04:12 PM
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Banned
Location: central USA
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*smiles*... Peetster... i love it!
mine are just sappy and more serious... certainly not "better" , "out league-ing" or anything of the sort... (out league-ing?? *laugh*, i have got to stop making up my own words). i am a serious amatuer... but am also stubborn as hell, and love trying to make it all fit within the rules... *snicker* thanks... and keep it coming! |
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06-04-2003, 04:23 AM
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Minion of the scaléd ones
Location: Northeast Jesusland
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OK, it breaks the personal pronouns rule, but this came to me at work one day:
Man! This weed is Great! The last time I was this high I drooled on my shirt. My favorite Haiku has got to be Dennis Miller's, though: The Umbrella drinks The Master of Sassy jive Isaac rules the waves
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06-09-2003, 11:23 AM
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Tilted
Location: Dingden, DE / Centennial, CO
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I wrote this one a while ago
Sun rises on Snow covered car So cold I just took the German lyrics from Tool's "Die Eier Von Satan" and made them into a quasi-haiku for this one. I know it ain't mine, but if you know German, it's kinda funny and stupid Eine halbe Tasse Staubzucker und keine Eier English translation: One half cup powdered sugar and no eggs See? No sense at all.
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Waiting... to be born again Wanting... the saddest kind of pain Waiting for the day when I will crawl away |
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06-14-2003, 05:09 PM
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Upright
Location: in the woods
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far up in slow hills
dream of smoke city dancing lately, without pills
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06-14-2003, 08:03 PM
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King Knave
Location: Lancaster
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Haiku comes easy,
in this lonely edge of town. Queens of the Stone Age blares raucous from the t.v. Ah, it's some repeat. Nature deviates for me. As I welcome rules I detest iron structure. but it feels so good. What? No -"Him Her I, Me You"? Begin to describe something outside of yourself.
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AzAbOv ZoBeLoE Last edited by QuasiMojo; 06-14-2003 at 08:08 PM.. |
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06-16-2003, 07:28 PM
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Go Ninja, Go Ninja Go!!
Location: IN, USA
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Lazer Tag Was Fun
Met A Girl, Without Her name Now My Mind Is Lost My Mind Has Left Me Bored Beyond Comprehension The Night Is Wasted...
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RoboBlaster: Welcome to the club! Not that I'm in the club. And there really isn'a a club in the first place. But if there was a club and if I was in it, I would definitely welcome you to it. Last edited by GakFace; 06-16-2003 at 07:39 PM.. |
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06-16-2003, 11:07 PM
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Upright
Location: in the woods
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thank you spring
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the days run over the hills like wild horses...-Bukowsky- i am the flying rodeo clown of death in qpids liberation army... lending my strange services in the noble cause of taking over the world before microsoft enslaves us all. |
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06-16-2003, 11:12 PM
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Upright
Location: in the woods
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charlie parker died
from living too much in truth his shadow blows on
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the days run over the hills like wild horses...-Bukowsky- i am the flying rodeo clown of death in qpids liberation army... lending my strange services in the noble cause of taking over the world before microsoft enslaves us all. |
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06-17-2003, 08:18 AM
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COMPLETED and A TRAINER
Location: BEAN_TOWN
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Spring Storms flourish Souls hide from its fury Growth has come 2. With growth blooming Summers essences bloom within Galaxygirl Alive and happy Did I do it right? PS...I like rules! although it doesn't mean I always follow them.
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LEATHER, LATEX and LACE "SSC" "Nothing That Gives Pleasure is Bad" Quality is for those who know what they want and are at peace with what they have. "S/M is about emotion; the erotic tension between my impulse toward something and my resistance against it."-- Virginia Barker |
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06-17-2003, 03:36 PM
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Go Ninja, Go Ninja Go!!
Location: IN, USA
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Five Syllables First
Then use Seven Syllables Back To Five, You're Done!! Here's a favorite that a friend wrote a few years ago...  Throughout Life I've Learned Girls Taste Like Potato Chips... You Can't Eat Just One (hahaha isnt' that hilarious? haha) --------------------------[edit]----------------- Just said 2 more to Z while talking to him on AIM.. here they are  (mind you I AM about to go eat some food. My poetry is In the form of a Haiku Isn't it Shibby? I Really Like Food. It Is About Time To Eat. Talk To You Later
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RoboBlaster: Welcome to the club! Not that I'm in the club. And there really isn'a a club in the first place. But if there was a club and if I was in it, I would definitely welcome you to it. Last edited by GakFace; 06-17-2003 at 03:42 PM.. |
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06-17-2003, 03:58 PM
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Banned
Location: central USA
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i8one2... i love rules too... until i have to follow them... *chuckle*
GakFace... yours... the first one... is my favorite in your post *smile* great haiku everyone! please keep it coming... Last edited by ~springrain; 06-17-2003 at 04:02 PM.. |
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06-19-2003, 07:22 PM
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Inspired by the mind's eye.
Location: Between the darkness and the light.
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Here is one a Japanese friend of mine wrote about me.
 Transliteration: a-me-ri-ka-ni mi-do-ri-me-wo-shi-ta ri-cha-a- do-zo Translation: In America There is a man who has green-colored eyes His name is Richard. While I can write poetry, I'm horrible at keeping track of syllibals so I'm lousy with haiku. Just as my friend can write haiku well, but she has difficulty with any poetry in English.
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06-20-2003, 04:33 PM
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Go Ninja, Go Ninja Go!!
Location: IN, USA
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Game: Diablo 2
Problem: Way Too Many hacks Solution: New Patch There is a different way at looking at a Haiku I Made Ten Good Puns... Then Tried To Win A Contest... No Pun In Ten did. I like the Seasons. My favorite is in May. Spring Rain is Way cool. ('nuff suckin' up for me )
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