Just Say Those Words (short poem)
 

Just Say Those Words

Just say those words, my heart beats faster
Close up my darkness, lonelyness
For a moment the world is complete
All is perfect all is light, except...

Dancing in my mind, reality
Recognition of truth shines through
Shattered light, illusion broken
I realize the failing truth of words

Just say those words, you love me, you lie
Opened my darkness, sealed 'way
The light! gone from my heart, torn away!
Spilled it out across the floor

The sorrow in my heart, pain of mind
Ravaged and Wretched emotion
Blackened Soul, Cold like ice, no more pain
no pain but what cost to my soul?

It is very deep and personal. Parts of it I can relate to. It seems so cold and lonely yet at the same time so full of pain. This is really good!

thanks for showing a part of your self

That's deep. I can relate to most of this I think. I love this stuff.

Very nice. I relate strongly to this one.
Please keep sharing with us!

I agree with these guys, please post more

I wrote this and maybe half of another poem, so don't expect more anytime soon lol

I have a wonderful girlfriend I've been dating for two months. I don't think it would be fair to tell her of the pain I keep inside. I feel numb inside just like the emotions your poem portrayed. I understand. Thanks for sharing