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cierah · 02-24-2005, 06:45 AM

this is your love...

clear vibrant eyes speak with a sincerity
that cannot reach parted lips.
it strikes unholy terror in my heart

a gentle touch with the unspoken
said aloud,
has become the touch of death

arms out stretched to take back
the time
the innocence

tears of blood; as a piece of me dies

scared and alone

as he says

love

tecoyah · 02-24-2005, 07:33 AM

Splendid.....much is said in this piece without overtly stating the intent.

Well done.

mojodragon · 02-26-2005, 09:04 AM

as she looks into my eyes
her love for me
she wears as a dress

her beauty cannot be matched
the glow from within
brought out by her love

my life feels complete
i am worshipped in her eyes
as I worship her

cierah · 02-26-2005, 10:33 AM

my eyes
shone as clear crystals of light
before you
now gather darkness and shed tears

my lips
shaped by the joy of life
before you
now lined in the blood of sadness

my essence
shone as bright as the sunrise
before you
now it falters

mojodragon · 02-26-2005, 10:49 AM

Dedicated to my true love:

I

Long for that touch
on bended knee I stand
vixen before me
entrapping me in her sight

Yanking on the strings
of my heart, bestowing her love
unworthy being that I am.

cierah · 02-26-2005, 10:52 AM

a blue robins egg lays nestled snug in a twig nest.

a broken dead duckling lays in a gob of it's own juices
when love is said

a crystal wave crashes against the sandy beach.

a dead smelly fish crashes against the rocks rubbing off scales
when love is said

a red maple falls peacefully to the ground.

a duck's carcass falls from the sky and thuds to the earth
when love is said

a perfect silver snowflake drifts to earth.

a cold eerie draft drifts across an abandoned dank room
when love is said

mojodragon · 02-26-2005, 11:17 AM

Inside did I die
Living only for her love;
Blossoming for her.

cierah · 03-02-2005, 01:13 PM

tell me how I can desire with such passion
yet feel void of emotion

tell me how I can look upon such beauty
yet feel void of emotion

tell me how I can yearn for contact
yet feel void of emotion

void of emotion:

I have not love

cierah · 03-16-2005, 02:41 PM

I whisper softly the love I hold for you and you reject the truth.
I reach to lovingly embrace you and you shrink away in fear.
The years of torment excape your soul as you run.
All is lost for I am fundamentally unlovable.

J.R.V.A. · 03-16-2005, 03:55 PM

Nice.... I like this a lot...Thanks

cierah · 03-16-2005, 06:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J.R.V.A.

Nice.... I like this a lot...Thanks

Thanks for the thanks. ~ It's nice to be appreciated.~

Hain · 03-16-2005, 08:02 PM

Where dost though come from?
As if from a dream slumbered
I lie'st here in thy arms

But oh for not
Your sweet, dampened lips
Meet with mine
To stir the fiery vapors that build my heart

But thy tongue is venomous
Filled with the lies that bring false hope
And with false hope, the deadly mind I fear!

For thy words are tainted with the smell my friend!
He, who I hath called friend,
Be that of mine own enemies!

Nay, not my enemy
For my enemies I respect for they stab'th
At my chest in the day.
But you!.. for my heart whilst I lie in hope!

Oh why have you come to me, sent me
Where the path of mine own wolves wait
Of demons that slither in my brain
Have changed me back to the monster I fear
The monster that tells me curse'd pleasures of power.

Oh I hate ... I love... I hate you...
For you cast me as anything without heart
Cast me like I was not there with you.
What did I do to deserve you?

...And you speak carefully as a tear wells in your eye
"You are too good for me. Why would you waste your passion on someone like me?"

"Waste..." And I remember it all as you forget. I watch you react to my hollowness, and you still have that tear.

Hain · 03-16-2005, 08:21 PM

Cierah, you have no clue how much you reminded me of what occurred to me.
Feels nice, and crappy, to remember that it never happens to only you.

EDIT: :thwacks head, begins praising: Your kung-foo is better than mine! Good stuff.

Keep it up.

cierah · 03-17-2005, 12:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Augi

Your kung-foo is better than mine!

That made me laugh. I am glad that the emotion comes across. Thanks.

cierah · 03-18-2005, 06:56 PM

The past is gone,
but yet remains
a shadow on today.

The future is to come
but is already marred
by yesterday.

The present is this moment
but unless it can affect the past
it has no bearing on the future.

Hain · 03-21-2005, 07:21 AM

How long has it been old love?
So long ago you tried to break my heart.
Today it succeeded and failed.

You wept when I wept
I laugh when you laugh.
Now I alway will be laughing.

Hasn't been a year?
My my, how times flies.
How emotions will heal.

But did mine?
Or is this another shell
The mask for covering, seeming fine.

Don't lie, go back to him.
Does he even love you with those others around?
You just keep pretending when he stops looking at you--

cierah · 04-07-2005, 06:26 PM

As the fog lifted and clarity fell upon the scenery I saw the mountain that lay before me. I approached the forbidden and soon realized that the mountain normally composed of earth and rocks was composed entirely of dry, white, empty human skulls. As I wretched the contents of my stomach into a nearby clump of bushes I saw a babbling brook and I went to relieve my parched throat and alleviate my cold sweat. The beauty of the clear, pristine creek was beyond words and caused my heart to bleed with a greater intensity than it ever had before or ever would again. I fell to my knees on its banks, the horror previously witnessed erased forever by the beauty of this place, and drank deeply of the cool, clean water. As my reflection stared at me, I smiled for I was content at last and consequently the water turned red and became a frothing mass of boiling blood. I had drunk deeply of the blood of the forsaken and was ashamed. Paralyzed I stood, covered in human blood, as corpses rose from the sacred ground. As a creature reached out his decaying arm towards me the smell of death reached my nostrils and I ran. I fell at the base of the mountain because I was tripped by a detached, decaying leg. Looking up I saw into the eyes of terror for I was looking into my own eyes. The eyes winked at my scared and terror filled soul and a deep, maniacal laugh reverberated off of the skulls of the mountain. Every skull the sound touched was soon spurting blood from its empty eye sockets.

This occurred as I lay dying.

02-24-2005, 06:45 AM	#1 (permalink)
cierah Crazy Location: Canada	this is your love... this is your love... clear vibrant eyes speak with a sincerity that cannot reach parted lips. it strikes unholy terror in my heart a gentle touch with the unspoken said aloud, has become the touch of death arms out stretched to take back the time the innocence tears of blood; as a piece of me dies scared and alone as he says love

02-24-2005, 07:33 AM	#2 (permalink)
tecoyah Illusionary	Splendid.....much is said in this piece without overtly stating the intent. Well done. __________________ Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha

02-26-2005, 10:33 AM	#4 (permalink)
cierah Crazy Location: Canada	before you my eyes shone as clear crystals of light before you now gather darkness and shed tears my lips shaped by the joy of life before you now lined in the blood of sadness my essence shone as bright as the sunrise before you now it falters

02-26-2005, 10:52 AM	#6 (permalink)
cierah Crazy Location: Canada	seasons a blue robins egg lays nestled snug in a twig nest. a broken dead duckling lays in a gob of it's own juices when love is said a crystal wave crashes against the sandy beach. a dead smelly fish crashes against the rocks rubbing off scales when love is said a red maple falls peacefully to the ground. a duck's carcass falls from the sky and thuds to the earth when love is said a perfect silver snowflake drifts to earth. a cold eerie draft drifts across an abandoned dank room when love is said

03-02-2005, 01:13 PM	#8 (permalink)
cierah Crazy Location: Canada	void of emotion tell me how I can desire with such passion yet feel void of emotion tell me how I can look upon such beauty yet feel void of emotion tell me how I can yearn for contact yet feel void of emotion void of emotion: I have not love

02-26-2005, 09:04 AM	#3 (permalink)
mojodragon Darth Mojo Location: Right behind you...	as she looks into my eyes her love for me she wears as a dress her beauty cannot be matched the glow from within brought out by her love my life feels complete i am worshipped in her eyes as I worship her

02-26-2005, 10:49 AM	#5 (permalink)
mojodragon Darth Mojo Location: Right behind you...	Dedicated to my true love: I Long for that touch on bended knee I stand vixen before me entrapping me in her sight Yanking on the strings of my heart, bestowing her love unworthy being that I am.

02-26-2005, 11:17 AM	#7 (permalink)
mojodragon Darth Mojo Location: Right behind you...	Inside did I die Living only for her love; Blossoming for her.

03-16-2005, 02:41 PM	#9 (permalink)
cierah Crazy Location: Canada	I whisper softly the love I hold for you and you reject the truth. I reach to lovingly embrace you and you shrink away in fear. The years of torment excape your soul as you run. All is lost for I am fundamentally unlovable.

03-16-2005, 03:55 PM	#10 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Nice.... I like this a lot...Thanks __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

03-16-2005, 08:02 PM	#12 (permalink)
Hain has a plan Location: middle of Whywouldanyonebethere	First Love's Monster Where dost though come from? As if from a dream slumbered I lie'st here in thy arms But oh for not Your sweet, dampened lips Meet with mine To stir the fiery vapors that build my heart But thy tongue is venomous Filled with the lies that bring false hope And with false hope, the deadly mind I fear! For thy words are tainted with the smell my friend! He, who I hath called friend, Be that of mine own enemies! Nay, not my enemy For my enemies I respect for they stab'th At my chest in the day. But you!.. for my heart whilst I lie in hope! Oh why have you come to me, sent me Where the path of mine own wolves wait Of demons that slither in my brain Have changed me back to the monster I fear The monster that tells me curse'd pleasures of power. Oh I hate ... I love... I hate you... For you cast me as anything without heart Cast me like I was not there with you. What did I do to deserve you? ...And you speak carefully as a tear wells in your eye "You are too good for me. Why would you waste your passion on someone like me?" "Waste..." And I remember it all as you forget. I watch you react to my hollowness, and you still have that tear. __________________ ////\\// IRONSKY.NET \\//\\\\ Last edited by Hain; 03-16-2005 at 08:07 PM.. Reason: Can't spell curse'd

03-16-2005, 08:21 PM	#13 (permalink)
Hain has a plan Location: middle of Whywouldanyonebethere	Cierah, you have no clue how much you reminded me of what occurred to me. Feels nice, and crappy, to remember that it never happens to only you. EDIT: :thwacks head, begins praising: Your kung-foo is better than mine! Good stuff. Keep it up. __________________ ////\\// IRONSKY.NET \\//\\\\ Last edited by Hain; 03-16-2005 at 08:25 PM.. Reason: ...I'm an idiot.

03-18-2005, 06:56 PM	#15 (permalink)
cierah Crazy Location: Canada	The past is gone, but yet remains a shadow on today. The future is to come but is already marred by yesterday. The present is this moment but unless it can affect the past it has no bearing on the future.

03-21-2005, 07:21 AM	#16 (permalink)
Hain has a plan Location: middle of Whywouldanyonebethere	How long has it been old love? So long ago you tried to break my heart. Today it succeeded and failed. You wept when I wept I laugh when you laugh. Now I alway will be laughing. Hasn't been a year? My my, how times flies. How emotions will heal. But did mine? Or is this another shell The mask for covering, seeming fine. Don't lie, go back to him. Does he even love you with those others around? You just keep pretending when he stops looking at you-- __________________ ////\\// IRONSKY.NET \\//\\\\

04-07-2005, 06:26 PM	#17 (permalink)
cierah Crazy Location: Canada	As the fog lifted and clarity fell upon the scenery I saw the mountain that lay before me. I approached the forbidden and soon realized that the mountain normally composed of earth and rocks was composed entirely of dry, white, empty human skulls. As I wretched the contents of my stomach into a nearby clump of bushes I saw a babbling brook and I went to relieve my parched throat and alleviate my cold sweat. The beauty of the clear, pristine creek was beyond words and caused my heart to bleed with a greater intensity than it ever had before or ever would again. I fell to my knees on its banks, the horror previously witnessed erased forever by the beauty of this place, and drank deeply of the cool, clean water. As my reflection stared at me, I smiled for I was content at last and consequently the water turned red and became a frothing mass of boiling blood. I had drunk deeply of the blood of the forsaken and was ashamed. Paralyzed I stood, covered in human blood, as corpses rose from the sacred ground. As a creature reached out his decaying arm towards me the smell of death reached my nostrils and I ran. I fell at the base of the mountain because I was tripped by a detached, decaying leg. Looking up I saw into the eyes of terror for I was looking into my own eyes. The eyes winked at my scared and terror filled soul and a deep, maniacal laugh reverberated off of the skulls of the mountain. Every skull the sound touched was soon spurting blood from its empty eye sockets. This occurred as I lay dying. Last edited by cierah; 04-28-2005 at 10:53 AM..