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Memalvada · 05-25-2003, 05:05 AM

My stuff is not particularly good, but I thought I'd share some with you guys...

Memalvada · 05-25-2003, 05:06 AM

My girl
Thought she might not have been the prettiest,
To my eyes, she was.
Though she might not have been the smartest,
To my mind, she was.
Though she may have been far from perfect,
To my soul, she was perfect.
And my heart belongs to her.

Not a day goes by without thinking of her.
Not a second goes by without my heart beating for her.
She is the air I breathe,
and without her, I choke.
How unfair life is if it is really over.

Memalvada · 05-25-2003, 05:07 AM

A boy and a girl
There was once a boy and a girl.
They were in love, deeply in love.

For her, he would have brought down the stars
just to see their reflection upon her eyes.
For her, he would have swam across a sea,
just to see the look of her face as she falls asleep.

And in every heartbeat
his soul professed his love for her,
A love that would know no time
nor distance, nor flaws.

This love was like no other,
for it had no bounds.
And yet, because of a whim of fate,
or one of the devil's treatcheries,
it was not meant to be.

The boy and the girl
went where they should have not gone.
A place where love is forgotten,
and where filth and fear are grown.
And a love that should have not gone to waste,
became tainted forever.

Now, far apart,
the boy still longs to be
close enough to the girl as to hear her heart beat.
His own heart grows weak,
withheld by only the hope that she is glad with her choice,
and that one day she'll return.

A wonderful love,
doomed to fade slowly into oblivion.
Such a waste....

Memalvada · 05-25-2003, 05:09 AM

I know Im stupid
I know Im stupid
I know Im dumb
I know Im a jerk
I know I put my foot in my mouth when we speak

But please babe,
understand my stupidity.
I may be stupid,
but I can learn.

Our love cant end because of a stupid mistake.
My mind is weak,
but my heart is strong.
I promise it won't happen again.

Memalvada · 05-25-2003, 05:10 AM

My love for you
Small at the beginning
didnt even know it was there.
It grew and grew and grew,
fed by your wonderful soul.

It became big,
yet it did not stop growing.
It became stronger each day.
It is your creation, yours and mine.

This love moves mountains.
This love makes oceans seem like puddles.
This love was bound to last forever,
beyond life, beyond the universe itself.
This love was never meant to die,
yet it vanishes slowly without you.
It is there, but it's missing you.

Memalvada · 08-12-2003, 06:19 AM

My dearest friend,

I hope that my following words make justice to your departure. (I’m sorry I don’t say these out loud, but I’ll get too emotional).

So, my dear friend, with these words I bid you farewell. May Lady Luck smile upon you on your every endeavour. Never wander astray from the path of the righteous and wise, and forever may you be as true as you now are. I hope that I was as good a friend as you were to me, and you will be deeply missed. I wish the best for you, and take care of yourself.

Remember your friends, we shall be awaiting eagerly for your return, and despite the distance, we’ll be with you whenever you need us, and whenever you don’t as well.

See you in a few months!

mml · 08-12-2003, 09:19 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Memalvada
My stuff is not particularly good, but I thought I'd share some with you guys...

Honestly, as long as something you write means something to you, whether it is emotional, philisophical, humorous etc., it is good.

I really liked the concept of "My Girl", I think we have all been there, at least I hope everyone has.

Thanks for sharing and I hope you continue to do so.

J.R.V.A. · 08-13-2003, 04:00 AM

Very good writitng, thanks for sharing. You put a lot of feeling down on paper. Thanks

Silvy · 08-13-2003, 04:44 AM

"My Girl" touched my heart, I can relate to it...

But they are all very good!

Memalvada · 08-13-2003, 07:08 PM

you are the one
the only one for me.
the one that gives me love
the one that gives me strength
the one that gives me breath
the one that gives me hope
the one that gives me life
the one that makes me laugh
the one that makes me cry
the one that makes my heart beat
the one that makes my heart stop
theres only room for one in my heart
that one is you.
yes, you are the one
the only one for me

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Glad you guys liked the previous poems

Memalvada · 08-14-2003, 01:42 PM

Im sick of the lies,
Im sick of your rules,
Im sick of your justice,
Im sick of your promises,
Im sick of the hipocresy.

This world of mine is all messed up
and you dont seem to care.
I wont fall in line,
I wont conform,
I wont shut up.

Here I rise among men,
to claim what i deserve.
You cannot keep me down,
my determination cannot break.

Memalvada · 08-24-2003, 05:34 PM

I love you like the plants love the sun,
like the bees love the flower,
like the tree loves the rain,
like the children summer,
like the birds love the air,
and like the fish love the water.

But forgive me,
for being the fool who
does not show the wonders of his love,
for being the fool who
knows not what he does,
for being the fool who
hurts who he loves the most.

So please forgive me for being such a fool

Memalvada · 08-24-2003, 05:44 PM

i want to shrink till i dissappear
i want to crawl under a stone
i want the earth to swallow me whole
i want to escape my tormenting conscience

In the darknness I must dwell
where none can see
what has become of me
with a mind full of shadows
and a heart full of regrets

Memalvada · 08-24-2003, 05:51 PM

The darkness of my mind,
and the coldness of my heart,
drive me towards misery,
and in shadows i shall meet my doom.

Blood and fire I see before my eyes
replacing the fairness of what my life once was

Memalvada · 08-24-2003, 06:05 PM

I lie crawled up inside
a dark corner of my mind,
while my life is consumed
by the demons outside.

Memalvada · 09-13-2003, 12:58 PM

For every tear in your eyes,
there are two in mine.
For every time I've hurt you,
For every dissapointment,
For every scar in your heart;
Cold needles pierce my insides,
and my brain and my heart burst in pain,
sending me in a downward spiral
of hatred and sorrow.

Yet, when I make you smile,
it lights up my very soul;
and your warm touch
is enough to make my cold insides melt,
and your every kiss
fills my spirit with delight.
And there's no place I'd rather be than in your arms.

Memalvada · 10-12-2003, 09:06 AM

The cold creeps into me again,
numbing all my senses,
awakening the dormant pain.

The darkeness covers my heart again,
dyeing my heart in tormented confusion.
Not even hope can get rid of its stain.

I've known frost nd shadow too long,
I've been in their cage too long.

But I must be strong.

Because a single star can challenge the night's domain,
and even a mouse can outlast winter,
and no matter what, next to myself I must remain.

Memalvada · 10-19-2003, 07:50 PM

Im in the darkness again
you buried me in gloom again.
You've dissapointed me again,
I've disappointed you again.
You're tearing me apart again,
You're tearing us apart again,
Im choking, im struggling,
Im dying again.

05-25-2003, 05:05 AM	#1 (permalink)
Memalvada Psycho Location: South of the border	Random stuff by Memalvada My stuff is not particularly good, but I thought I'd share some with you guys... __________________ "The weak are food for the strong, so die and let me feast!" - Makoto Shishio (RK) Last edited by Memalvada; 08-12-2003 at 06:16 AM..

05-25-2003, 05:06 AM	#2 (permalink)
Memalvada Psycho Location: South of the border	My girl Thought she might not have been the prettiest, To my eyes, she was. Though she might not have been the smartest, To my mind, she was. Though she may have been far from perfect, To my soul, she was perfect. And my heart belongs to her. Not a day goes by without thinking of her. Not a second goes by without my heart beating for her. She is the air I breathe, and without her, I choke. How unfair life is if it is really over. __________________ "The weak are food for the strong, so die and let me feast!" - Makoto Shishio (RK) Last edited by Memalvada; 05-25-2003 at 05:08 AM..

05-25-2003, 05:07 AM	#3 (permalink)
Memalvada Psycho Location: South of the border	A boy and a girl There was once a boy and a girl. They were in love, deeply in love. For her, he would have brought down the stars just to see their reflection upon her eyes. For her, he would have swam across a sea, just to see the look of her face as she falls asleep. And in every heartbeat his soul professed his love for her, A love that would know no time nor distance, nor flaws. This love was like no other, for it had no bounds. And yet, because of a whim of fate, or one of the devil's treatcheries, it was not meant to be. The boy and the girl went where they should have not gone. A place where love is forgotten, and where filth and fear are grown. And a love that should have not gone to waste, became tainted forever. Now, far apart, the boy still longs to be close enough to the girl as to hear her heart beat. His own heart grows weak, withheld by only the hope that she is glad with her choice, and that one day she'll return. A wonderful love, doomed to fade slowly into oblivion. Such a waste.... __________________ "The weak are food for the strong, so die and let me feast!" - Makoto Shishio (RK)

05-25-2003, 05:09 AM	#4 (permalink)
Memalvada Psycho Location: South of the border	I know Im stupid I know Im stupid I know Im dumb I know Im a jerk I know I put my foot in my mouth when we speak But please babe, understand my stupidity. I may be stupid, but I can learn. Our love cant end because of a stupid mistake. My mind is weak, but my heart is strong. I promise it won't happen again. __________________ "The weak are food for the strong, so die and let me feast!" - Makoto Shishio (RK)

05-25-2003, 05:10 AM	#5 (permalink)
Memalvada Psycho Location: South of the border	My love for you Small at the beginning didnt even know it was there. It grew and grew and grew, fed by your wonderful soul. It became big, yet it did not stop growing. It became stronger each day. It is your creation, yours and mine. This love moves mountains. This love makes oceans seem like puddles. This love was bound to last forever, beyond life, beyond the universe itself. This love was never meant to die, yet it vanishes slowly without you. It is there, but it's missing you. __________________ "The weak are food for the strong, so die and let me feast!" - Makoto Shishio (RK)

08-12-2003, 06:19 AM	#6 (permalink)
Memalvada Psycho Location: South of the border	Letter for departing friend My dearest friend, I hope that my following words make justice to your departure. (I’m sorry I don’t say these out loud, but I’ll get too emotional). So, my dear friend, with these words I bid you farewell. May Lady Luck smile upon you on your every endeavour. Never wander astray from the path of the righteous and wise, and forever may you be as true as you now are. I hope that I was as good a friend as you were to me, and you will be deeply missed. I wish the best for you, and take care of yourself. Remember your friends, we shall be awaiting eagerly for your return, and despite the distance, we’ll be with you whenever you need us, and whenever you don’t as well. See you in a few months! __________________ "The weak are food for the strong, so die and let me feast!" - Makoto Shishio (RK) Last edited by Memalvada; 08-12-2003 at 06:38 AM..

08-13-2003, 04:00 AM	#8 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	Very good writitng, thanks for sharing. You put a lot of feeling down on paper. Thanks __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart

08-13-2003, 04:44 AM	#9 (permalink)
Silvy paranoid Location: The Netherlands	"My Girl" touched my heart, I can relate to it... But they are all very good! __________________ "Do not kill. Do not rape. Do not steal. These are principles which every man of every faith can embrace. " - Murphy MacManus (Boondock Saints)

08-13-2003, 07:08 PM	#10 (permalink)
Memalvada Psycho Location: South of the border	THE ONE you are the one the only one for me. the one that gives me love the one that gives me strength the one that gives me breath the one that gives me hope the one that gives me life the one that makes me laugh the one that makes me cry the one that makes my heart beat the one that makes my heart stop theres only room for one in my heart that one is you. yes, you are the one the only one for me -------------------------------------------------------------------- Glad you guys liked the previous poems __________________ "The weak are food for the strong, so die and let me feast!" - Makoto Shishio (RK)

08-14-2003, 01:42 PM	#11 (permalink)
Memalvada Psycho Location: South of the border	[no title] Im sick of the lies, Im sick of your rules, Im sick of your justice, Im sick of your promises, Im sick of the hipocresy. This world of mine is all messed up and you dont seem to care. I wont fall in line, I wont conform, I wont shut up. Here I rise among men, to claim what i deserve. You cannot keep me down, my determination cannot break. __________________ "The weak are food for the strong, so die and let me feast!" - Makoto Shishio (RK)

08-24-2003, 05:34 PM	#12 (permalink)
Memalvada Psycho Location: South of the border	Forgive me for the fool I am I love you like the plants love the sun, like the bees love the flower, like the tree loves the rain, like the children summer, like the birds love the air, and like the fish love the water. But forgive me, for being the fool who does not show the wonders of his love, for being the fool who knows not what he does, for being the fool who hurts who he loves the most. So please forgive me for being such a fool __________________ "The weak are food for the strong, so die and let me feast!" - Makoto Shishio (RK)

08-24-2003, 05:44 PM	#13 (permalink)
Memalvada Psycho Location: South of the border	i want to shrink till i dissappear i want to crawl under a stone i want the earth to swallow me whole i want to escape my tormenting conscience In the darknness I must dwell where none can see what has become of me with a mind full of shadows and a heart full of regrets __________________ "The weak are food for the strong, so die and let me feast!" - Makoto Shishio (RK)

08-24-2003, 05:51 PM	#14 (permalink)
Memalvada Psycho Location: South of the border	The darkness of my mind, and the coldness of my heart, drive me towards misery, and in shadows i shall meet my doom. Blood and fire I see before my eyes replacing the fairness of what my life once was __________________ "The weak are food for the strong, so die and let me feast!" - Makoto Shishio (RK)

08-24-2003, 06:05 PM	#15 (permalink)
Memalvada Psycho Location: South of the border	I lie crawled up inside a dark corner of my mind, while my life is consumed by the demons outside. __________________ "The weak are food for the strong, so die and let me feast!" - Makoto Shishio (RK)

09-13-2003, 12:58 PM	#16 (permalink)
Memalvada Psycho Location: South of the border	for every tear in your eyes For every tear in your eyes, there are two in mine. For every time I've hurt you, For every dissapointment, For every scar in your heart; Cold needles pierce my insides, and my brain and my heart burst in pain, sending me in a downward spiral of hatred and sorrow. Yet, when I make you smile, it lights up my very soul; and your warm touch is enough to make my cold insides melt, and your every kiss fills my spirit with delight. And there's no place I'd rather be than in your arms. __________________ "The weak are food for the strong, so die and let me feast!" - Makoto Shishio (RK)

10-12-2003, 09:06 AM	#17 (permalink)
Memalvada Psycho Location: South of the border	The cold creeps into me again, numbing all my senses, awakening the dormant pain. The darkeness covers my heart again, dyeing my heart in tormented confusion. Not even hope can get rid of its stain. I've known frost nd shadow too long, I've been in their cage too long. But I must be strong. Because a single star can challenge the night's domain, and even a mouse can outlast winter, and no matter what, next to myself I must remain. __________________ "The weak are food for the strong, so die and let me feast!" - Makoto Shishio (RK)

10-19-2003, 07:50 PM	#18 (permalink)
Memalvada Psycho Location: South of the border	Not Again... Im in the darkness again you buried me in gloom again. You've dissapointed me again, I've disappointed you again. You're tearing me apart again, You're tearing us apart again, Im choking, im struggling, Im dying again. __________________ "The weak are food for the strong, so die and let me feast!" - Makoto Shishio (RK)