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Old 05-22-2003, 09:53 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Location: Kansas
Does it really mater

I know you are here.
I can feel you, but
Does it really matter?
You are so very far away and yet,
You are standing right beside me.
Does it really matter?
I sit here, beside you
Wanting nothing more than to touch you
To have you hold me in your arms. And yet,
Does it really matter?
You are my friend and I only want your happiness.
My true feelings are hidden for fear of losing you.
So I hide part of myself , trying to protect us.
Do you know the old saying:
The worst way to miss someone
Is to be sitting right beside them
And knowing you cant have them?
It is oh so very true.
I want you in my life,
Yet I know I could never have you.
Does it really matter?
Yes, it does matter.
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Old 05-22-2003, 10:04 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Location: Kansas
You have revealed a great paradox in life. Time changes things, and it also heals.
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Old 05-24-2003, 06:24 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Location: Davenport, Iowa
This was great. I can totally relate, I've been in the same situation.


The simplicity of the words almost hide the underlying emotion.

Great work.
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Old 05-25-2003, 02:25 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Location: Hiding from the penguins they come to take my sanity away!
ahh yes welcome to the friends zone. Do not adjust your life... lol

I like that. great work.
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Old 05-26-2003, 11:42 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Location: There's no place like home..
Wanting, but never having. the true test of friendship between two people. Don't worry about what you can't have but look at things they are missing for not having you! And don't feel too lonely, I am still here for you.
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Old 06-04-2003, 11:06 PM   #6 (permalink)
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very caustic.
empathic yet subtle.
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