Well, you have been busy girl. SOrry it's been so long sense I stopped in here and took a read. Good stuff. I need to start cranking out some new words myself. It's always nice to get a peek into that that mind of yours. It's an intresting place to be. :)

Seer!! I've missed you! Yeah...well...:o You know how it is...idle hands is the poets playground...wait...that's not how it goes...

I'm sorry I missed you this evening...work has been exhausting, there's been drama here and there , something's are just...well...unorganized right now...I look forward to reading more of your work, Seer, as always...your poems blow any of my shit out of the water. :D

Like I said. WOW. I agree with Ironmaiden here. I think you should look into publishing your works. I've read all of them now and so many of them are just deeply moving in ways one has trouble explaining. I love how all of them are so well structured as well. I know nothing of structure myself, my pieces show this but yours are not only structured well in a way that is easy to follow but they lose no value in this either. I'm glad I decided to finally catch up on your writings.

My only regret is I waited too long to provide more quotes :).

Asta!!

Please, please stop, just let me go,
Your memory has just plagued me so,
Now the happiness my life does lack,
Is all because I just want you back.

I didn't see how I would be a mess,
As in each day of my life I progress,
Each memory is cloaked within sorrow,
As I fight to forget you again tomorrow.

As always, a well written piece. Clear image sent to the reader and meaning hidden between the lines.

I would remove "just" from the second line.

But that is just my call.

Always a pleasure to read you Amnesia

I agree with you, tecoyah.

I'm glad to be a part of that which brings a stream of sunlight into your, and others, lives. :D If that makes any sense...

The tiniest ember
burning inside
outlasting the others
has finally died
Those that didn't last
are kept alive
by the last little ember's
thoughts which thrive
Until it blinks out
and is no longer there

Is today the day
in which I stay
no longer shall I drift away
what to say
some may pray
no f****** way
or "she's a nice lay"
Hey Hey Hey
I just may...
only if it's okay...

Still coming out with good stuff. Glad we talked today and glad I checked back in here. Short but sweet are all 3 I hadn't read yet. The first is my favorite. Keep writing :D

Asta!!

In the corner
of the living room
she sits quietly, alone,
and just by looking at her
one might dare assume
that she isn't worth a shit.

By chance, to someone she's a hottie
though she looks kinda naughty
but hey, now, she could be nice
I'm not sure if that will suffice
usually only for some loser
the kind with no balls
to even talk to her...

Enter, "Stage Right", the Typical Asshole
You know the type
The Wham-Bam-Don't-Give-A-Damn
That's right, you know the type
The Jerk, The Real Loser
The one who will charm her
then harm her in some way...

Wish I had a girl like her...

If only I could get her to go for a guy like me...

What'd I give to be an Asshole.

Inside herself she sees someone I dont know
who is this frail soul of lost passion
knowing herself as she does
kidding herself
each passing day lets some held emotion go
part of my love with it in a fashion
her only answer......because
Killing herself
and Me

Well done once again, Tecoyah. I like it - touching on a deeper level...
Something destroyed so that something else could be created...I suppose...cycle of life...

In any single instant,
a moment in time was frozen,
like the smallest cube of ice,
then dropped upon Reality's own plane,
anticipation is what will entice,
as if already we've been chosen,
to never drop, forever to remain,
in any single instant.

Alright, everyone, I have continued my work in Shadows of my Soul Poetry - Chapter Two. Hope you all enjoy it and I'll be looking forward to your critiques. :)