K-Wise

Hey. Forgot I promised Amonkie and Seer666 I'd post up more of my rap lyrics. Since I haven't really bothered to write anymore poetry I might as well eh? This isn't yet finished but I'm such a procrastinator...might even just get a friend in on it with me and he can do the other verse or something if I don't have time...Not sure what to call this one. Guess the obvious would be "We got questions" but I dunno seems a little too cliche to name it after the phrase I came up with for the hook rather than thinking about what the rhyme as a whole is really about. If you have ideas feel free.

(Note: Meant to be read rather quickly. Apologies if it's difficult to read.)

Yo

Somewhere off in the grips of space there exists a place encased in hate and love at a simultaneous state//and hope reverberates upon the wings of grace to the eyes and ears of children raped or mentally scared and hurt in different ways to wipe their tears and help them think of better days//Where the cool air can hit your face and life is looked upon a different gaze//With the coming of age you realize that somethings changed and some things change//Nothings the same and no thing's the same except for reminiscent thoughts at play. Soon there comes a day when you will reminisce your thoughts away//But not before the phaze you fight the haze away in righteous ways an evermoving crazed iconoclast enraged by all the worlds hypocracy(ay)//And a childs eyes can bleed the truth so honestly but yet they're awefully condemned to what is wrong today//So much it's hard to find a way for the world to raise them harmlessly especially when parents neglect to bring them up responsibly//Confused asking "What is wrong with me?" Nothing is wrong with thee you've just been wrongfully informed of what is honorably//Think remarkably a fetus should never be brought up to think defeatus instead of realizing the uniqueness that is bestoyed upon in each us, "I and I" yo, we all are equals//To each his is what they teach us but in this world full of teachers no one is learning how will they reach us? Needless the question is asked and all are speechless//Theres too many questions not enough answers they'll turn to reefer or to Jesus//Either way you’ll question either way when certainty became a slave of vague and certain days ya caught between the rage and bitter cold disconsolate//Got ta concentrate says “Whats his face” and all ya left to face is to embrace what is ya destined fate//And when the words of hate e’ll make ya soul a feel of desolate ya never break and hold it as a test a strength//And though it hurts so whats in the dust goes, and dies.....So just know what lives in dirt grows, throughout the bitter colds, stronger than that of which hurts most//We're too often too eager to suffer the meager to the reaper cause we're either too jaded or blinded to know we’re weaker cause bashing rather than understanding seems easier than acknowledging that we’re feebler//A blatant disregard for others the sons a bitches we curse brothers are more often the sons a loving & caring mothers//And thus the just suffer just cause a the way that the fucks cover - our motha earth in a hearse of perverse blunder//Damn son it's not a wonder...

Yo in all a lifes lessons manifestin whether blessin or depression
WE GOT QUESTIONS...
Mind stressin on the suffers of ya brethren only recollection is Indeed
WE GOT QUESTIONS...
Why me? Why she? Why we? Best believe it seems WE GOT QUESTIONS

But wheres the answers?...Hey yo I said wheres the answers?

Hope I didn't dissapoint with this one. Ha who would have thought Tilted Literature would feature rap lyrics as well? Thank you for reading, feel free to be honest. I'll try and spark my lazy brain into conjuring up more pieces whether they be lyrical or literature or poetry. Maybe even start adding more to this one who knows?

Asta!!

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amonkie

Now see, if all of rap was like those lyrics you put up, I'd be a convert. I was saying them in my head to get the rythm - I really like this - especially "a child's eyes can bleed the truth so honestly".

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K-Wise

^ I've noticed a lot of people like that line.

Asta!!

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"I love music and it's my parents fault (closing statement)." - Me..quoting myself...from when I said that...On TFP..thats here...Tilted Forum Project

It ain't goodbye, it's see ya later! I'll miss you guys! - Asta!!

mokle

Good work man.

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Mokle
"Your hands can't hit what your eyes can't see" -Ali

K-Wise

Hey thanx man I have other pieces too feel free to reply to them One only got 1 reply

Asta!!

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"I love music and it's my parents fault (closing statement)." - Me..quoting myself...from when I said that...On TFP..thats here...Tilted Forum Project

It ain't goodbye, it's see ya later! I'll miss you guys! - Asta!!

mokle

Doing a search now

I love rap myself, I'm always doing a freestyle, but when I'm by myself. I'm way to embarrased of any form of public expression to actually let other people listen

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Mokle
"Your hands can't hit what your eyes can't see" -Ali