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Heartsick
An endless sky
and a lonely sea Keeps you far away from me. An empty cavern a burning sun will I know if you're the one? These four things I do feel strong I just hope it won't be long. |
So much for out of sight out of mind. Putting the emotions of missing one who's gone afar into 3 stanza's is impressive enough. Waiting is the hardest? Good piece. Hope the wait isn't too long for you as well.
Asta!! |
Your poem reminds me of one I wrote a couple of years ago. It's lovely. But, I can't help asking has it worked out for you, relationship wise?
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It is, slowly :)
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