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05-19-2003, 05:52 PM
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The Cheshire Grin...
Location: An Aussie Outback
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The Awakening
This is an old story that's in the process of still being worked on. Major writers block at the moment.. or I'm just lazy.. probably the latter of the two
 Anyways tell me what you think  The Awakening I was just reading through a few pages and noticed some of the garbled mistakes. Definetly needs a proof. Thanks all 
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05-21-2003, 06:41 AM
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Junkie
Location: Utah
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I think its pretty good. I was drawn into it, and I was going to just read a little, and I found myself not stopping. Very nice. You have a way with words, and I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing
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05-31-2003, 03:56 PM
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Naughty Just Right
Location: Euphoria
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Well, I gave it an honest shot! I couldn't get it to link me!
And jaker's Stephen King like comment made me even more bent that I couldn't get it! Perhaps another try later....
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05-31-2003, 04:07 PM
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Naughty Just Right
Location: Euphoria
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UH! *scowls, stomps foot and pouts!*
Why won't this work for me??????? Okay Angel, breathe...there now, that's better... One more try later.
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