seretogis

new and improved, more teen angst than ever before!

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horrible beautiful secret

The smile on your face
draws me like a moth to a flame
And I wonder, if you knew,
things would still be the same

I only wish I could tell
how I feel about you
In my dreams I feel
that you already knew

This secret of mine

Alas, my romantic wishing,
my hopes, my dreams, my fears
When the truth is known to you,
I pray to see you through my tears

I love you in a way
that no one could explain
And thoughts of your rejection
cause me such pain

This horrible secret of mine

Better not to tell you
and merely admire from afar
Or shall I take the chance
and wish upon your star

To lose you would be worse
Than the sieze of my soul
Losing you would destroy me
So my heart must pay the toll

This beautiful secret of mine

Remove from me these chains
Of pity, doubt, and fear
Show to me somehow
A path which is clear

Until I can trust myself
Enough to tell you how I feel
I must hide this secret
'Til I'm served my last meal

This horrible beautiful secret of mine

My soul and pen become one
As I think of us two
In hopes you will read this
and know I write of you

When you do understand
And rip my heart from my chest
Please realize, these tears of blood
Were only for the best

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seretogis - sieg heil
perfect little dream the kind that hurts the most, forgot how it feels well almost
no one to blame always the same, open my eyes wake up in flames

krazykemist

Great imagery and the message is clear.
Nice work.

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"Everyone thinks of changing the world, but no one thinks of changing himself." -- Tolstoy

Angel

I really like the texture and feel of this. Very moving.
Such conflict residing deep within.
A pleasure to read.
Thank you for sharing.

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In the depth of winter, I finally learned that there was within me an invincible summer.
~Albert Camus

Eowyn_Vala

this is one of the most beautiful pieces i have ever read. your writing is very moving and i am at a loss for what to say.

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Cain: I know what you're doing. I've lead troops into battle before.
DG: And, how am I doing?
Cain: Well, there's less *hugging* when I do it

urgodhere

Very very good. I love the message and the tone/imagery is excellent for the message. Very pleasurable to read. Plz post more of ur outstanding work.

SaltPork

Stunning in it's visuals and very moving. Thank you for sharing this, I'm sure many can relate.

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It was like that when I got here....I swear.

bobdobbs8056135

tone of a certain age adequately summed

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the days run over the hills like wild horses...-Bukowsky- i am the flying rodeo clown of death in qpids liberation army... lending my strange services in the noble cause of taking over the world before microsoft enslaves us all.

a_divine_martyr

Great piece of writing.

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Censorship and thought control can only exist in secrecy and darkness...

seretogis

If you likey, you can see my other poetry at:
http://www.tfproject.org/tfp/showthr...&postid=327619

Or, you can view it on my website along with other writings, by clicking the "www" button below.

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seretogis - sieg heil
perfect little dream the kind that hurts the most, forgot how it feels well almost
no one to blame always the same, open my eyes wake up in flames

J.R.V.A.

Cool, good stuff. Thanks for sharing

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And as she plays,
her sweet song of laughter
floats through the air
and warms my heart

fallen_angel

great work. . . the imagery is amazing and the emotions that you put out into the open are wonderful. . . thank you

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from the Havens I have fallen. . . to the earth as a mangled form. . . writhing in pain, my wings torn and bloodied. . . I have one purpose, only one goal. . . to find you and love you, for I am your. . . fallen angel