My thoughts on war...a poem
 

Crying Sobbing Yelling Screaming
Shooting Running Fighting Fleeing
Listening to your orders
Shooting up the yanks
Wondering why this is going on, And why you see the tanks
Its all because of two stupid souls Saddam hussien,
and that selfish hick
These two guys on their power trips with their stubborn rhetoric and convenient lies

I wrote this in like 2003 and just found it..thought i may as well post...

I like your poem. Your emotion runs deep for this issue (the same for many people) so it'd be great if you could make it longer or write another poem that was longer. Just my one and 1/2 cents.