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08-11-2004, 12:07 PM
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In transition
Location: north, no south abit, over to the right, getting warmer...there!
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My thoughts on war...a poem
Crying Sobbing Yelling Screaming
Shooting Running Fighting Fleeing Listening to your orders Shooting up the yanks Wondering why this is going on, And why you see the tanks Its all because of two stupid souls Saddam hussien, and that selfish hick These two guys on their power trips with their stubborn rhetoric and convenient lies I wrote this in like 2003 and just found it..thought i may as well post... |
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08-18-2004, 09:06 AM
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Location: Boone, NC
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I like your poem. Your emotion runs deep for this issue (the same for many people) so it'd be great if you could make it longer or write another poem that was longer. Just my one and 1/2 cents.
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