BooHoo type stuff
 

I was just scribbling out some stuff tonight about a girl I know, and this is what fell out of the pen... Hope you all enjoy it...


Seasons pass. Love fades away. we grow apart. With the passing of each waking moment, comes the longing for your touch, until it is realized that you've moved along your path in life and I'm still waiting, like the dog for it's owner for you to return to me. but you never do, and finally with a heavy heart
and a final heave of my chest
I curl up alone, and sleep a lonely existence.
But sleep won't come on this restless night, the vampires of regret sucking at my mind

Could I have kept you? What did I do? Does she still think about me?

All are questions that I ask as I fade into oblivion...

Just know that as I pass that you are and will be on my mind and in my heart..

:(

You are a good poet

awesome :)

Geezus Spike you literally just described what happened to me in the beginning of July... :(

When I keep my mind off of it and just let the pen work with the subconsious mind, stuff like that happens, but if i don't then i get all sorts of rhymes.

I like the automatic stuff I do. Thanks for the feedback. It's appreciated.

way too familiar, it's a bit eery. Great writing Spike

That's really good. Excellent metaphors.....

too familiar? that's strange, seems like this really hit it on the head for a lot of people.

It's kinda creepy to me, because I'm not normally writing like that. I just can't sit and say, "I'm gonna write poetry". I end up with all kinds of goofy rhymes and all that. Sounds more like a rap song that what I actually feel.

I'm glad that people connect with this for whatever reason.