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Old 07-29-2004, 05:04 AM   #1 (permalink)
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A poem.. for a special someone [Untitled]

I don't title my poems . haha


Thoughts of you returns pleasantness,
Such pleasantness used before a dream,
In hope of having the sweetest dream,
To dream of you.

An awkward silence that we share together,
Is very much as precious as gold,
Alike your golden smile that lights the room.
The presence of you makes no space for gloom,
There is only room for happiness to bloom.
As I cannot have your eternal presence,
A picture I have of you in my head,
A picture I see every now and then,
To look at a face so meaningful to me,
As it gives a sense of happiness and joy,
Together with a smile for all to see.

If I chance upon a day alone,
I would choose to spend it all with you.
It is you that means most to me,
There is no one else I would rather see,
For you have the hands that I wish to hold.

- Wee Sim
Written for Rachel. 20th June 2004.
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Old 07-29-2004, 06:48 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Good-o. Highlight was 'If I chance upon a day alone,'

THats great, i love that.
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Old 07-29-2004, 07:14 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Awwwww, I thought it was for me!

Very very nice work!
 
Old 07-29-2004, 07:32 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I loved that poem thanks for sharing
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Old 07-29-2004, 08:50 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Praises nourishes my soul.

I receive your praises with many thanks
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