Weekly Workout 2 - Tilted Forum Project Discussion Community

tecoyah · 07-19-2004, 05:06 AM

Inspired by a certain blockage one of our venerable members is struggling through.

How about a little frustration/anger.....put to pen..

J.R.V.A. · 07-19-2004, 06:00 AM

I think I'd like to see you fly
All you do is make me cry
I hate the you that I know too
Your presence seems to leave me blue
Another day left in your arms
Insanity in my mind swarms

amonkie · 07-19-2004, 08:01 AM

Memories vivid
Time stands still
So long after
A sting still remains

Could not make you see
The one meant to be won
Lost in yourself
You missed out on me

xray21 · 07-19-2004, 11:04 AM

Every day I see you
Theres something new I Dispise in you..
Your so hard to understand
Why Why do I fell this way
It sucks to know I still love you

Theres more talking to a wall then you
But some how I know I still love you
I sorry If I made it this way But

Love sucks
Love bites it alll ends in a fight
I know my way
I should go
Yet I think I still love you.. I dont

pan6467 · 07-19-2004, 01:06 PM

Anger eating at the soul
Unrest and irrational thoughts mind control
Fists being made teeth being clenched
Sweating profusely clothes get drenched

Frustration over misunderstandings and feelings stepped on
Striking out at everyone
Imagination gone it disappears
And negativity is all you see, feel, taste and hear

Vandalism done to strike out
Obscenities and hatred all you can shout
No reason no sanity
Just anger and hatred for all humanity

Soon this becomes your only friend
Leading to desolation, solitude and self destruction as you end
Losing faith in God, love and happiness
You die alone in your filthy bed of bitterness

WOW!!!! that darkness came out of me? Better eat an Oreo and make the world right again.

tecoyah · 07-19-2004, 01:10 PM

Wow....day One and we have a feast of frustrated anger, Rock on!!!

"I hate the you that I know too"

Splendid....I think I know her

Xray- The whole thing stings...

Wonderful job so far....lets keep going
Mine will be forthcoming

"Lost in yourself
You missed out on me"

also great stuff....

tecoyah · 07-19-2004, 03:02 PM

Damn Pan...that was harsh, I liked it alot.
dark emotion.

tecoyah · 07-19-2004, 03:44 PM

Eating old crow, no feathered smile
Past discretion in current pages
Remembrance of younger guile
Regret of childish rages, shattered joys

Stolen for a decades ride
Swept under this tattered covering
The pain I caused and tried to hide
Tossed aside your loving, as broken toys

Today brings shuddering sympathetic cries
The ripped heart strings on her face
Cannot undo my life of lies, my ego tries
Emotions cringing in disgrace, as boys will be boys
Boys….will be boys

tecoyah · 07-22-2004, 07:11 AM

*Bump*

Any other takers?

ForgottenKnight · 07-22-2004, 09:17 PM

The week's not over yet!

Today I broke my writer's block!

So here goes:

Evil Within

Although angry, in my eye lies a tear.
"How could you do such a thing to me there?
What caused you to do such a stupid dare?
Did you think that you would impress your peer?
What of these consequences you don't fear?
Don't you realize you are stripping me bare?
That act is costing us all that we share!
Thus I stand here trembling in great despair.
Why are you acting as if you don't care?
You're impossible to work with, you hear?
I want your sinful nature out of here!
What's left to say? Have I made myself clear?"
I stop yelling and in silence I stare
At the face peeping back from the mirror.

tecoyah · 07-23-2004, 03:53 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by ForgottenKnight

I stop yelling and in silence I stare
At the face peeping back from the mirror.

Welcome Back ......these lines got me pretty good, great way to end the piece.
Thanks .

Ryan · 07-23-2004, 05:42 PM

I really liked what you had to share ForgottenKnight, I was able to relate to it pretty well. Thank you.

ForgottenKnight · 07-23-2004, 08:22 PM

Thanks guys!

All of the poems submitted for the weekly workouts are great! Lets keep up the fantastic writing!

07-19-2004, 05:06 AM	#1 (permalink)
tecoyah Illusionary	Weekly Workout 2 Inspired by a certain blockage one of our venerable members is struggling through. How about a little frustration/anger.....put to pen.. __________________ Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha

07-19-2004, 06:00 AM	#2 (permalink)
J.R.V.A. Junkie Location: Utah	I think I'd like to see you fly All you do is make me cry I hate the you that I know too Your presence seems to leave me blue Another day left in your arms Insanity in my mind swarms __________________ And as she plays, her sweet song of laughter floats through the air and warms my heart Last edited by J.R.V.A.; 01-13-2005 at 06:18 AM..

07-19-2004, 08:01 AM	#3 (permalink)
amonkie Drifting Administrator Location: Windy City	Memories vivid Time stands still So long after A sting still remains Could not make you see The one meant to be won Lost in yourself You missed out on me __________________ Calling from deep in the heart, from where the eyes can't see and the ears can't hear, from where the mountain trails end and only love can go... ~~~ Three Rivers Hare Krishna Last edited by amonkie; 07-19-2004 at 12:56 PM..

07-19-2004, 11:04 AM	#4 (permalink)
xray21 Tilted Location: Oregon	Every day I see you Theres something new I Dispise in you.. Your so hard to understand Why Why do I fell this way It sucks to know I still love you Theres more talking to a wall then you But some how I know I still love you I sorry If I made it this way But Love sucks Love bites it alll ends in a fight I know my way I should go Yet I think I still love you.. I dont __________________ Blessed By Pain

07-19-2004, 01:06 PM	#5 (permalink)
pan6467 Lennonite Priest Location: Mansfield, Ohio USA	Anger eating at the soul Unrest and irrational thoughts mind control Fists being made teeth being clenched Sweating profusely clothes get drenched Frustration over misunderstandings and feelings stepped on Striking out at everyone Imagination gone it disappears And negativity is all you see, feel, taste and hear Vandalism done to strike out Obscenities and hatred all you can shout No reason no sanity Just anger and hatred for all humanity Soon this becomes your only friend Leading to desolation, solitude and self destruction as you end Losing faith in God, love and happiness You die alone in your filthy bed of bitterness WOW!!!! that darkness came out of me? Better eat an Oreo and make the world right again. __________________ I just love people who use the excuse "I use/do this because I LOVE the feeling/joy/happiness it brings me" and expect you to be ok with that as you watch them destroy their life blindly following. My response is, "I like to put forks in an eletrical socket, just LOVE that feeling, can't ever get enough of it, so will you let me put this copper fork in that electric socket?"

07-19-2004, 01:10 PM	#6 (permalink)
tecoyah Illusionary	Wow....day One and we have a feast of frustrated anger, Rock on!!! "I hate the you that I know too" Splendid....I think I know her Xray- The whole thing stings... Wonderful job so far....lets keep going Mine will be forthcoming "Lost in yourself You missed out on me" also great stuff.... __________________ Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha

07-19-2004, 03:02 PM	#7 (permalink)
tecoyah Illusionary	Damn Pan...that was harsh, I liked it alot. dark emotion. __________________ Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha

07-19-2004, 03:44 PM	#8 (permalink)
tecoyah Illusionary	Eating old crow, no feathered smile Past discretion in current pages Remembrance of younger guile Regret of childish rages, shattered joys Stolen for a decades ride Swept under this tattered covering The pain I caused and tried to hide Tossed aside your loving, as broken toys Today brings shuddering sympathetic cries The ripped heart strings on her face Cannot undo my life of lies, my ego tries Emotions cringing in disgrace, as boys will be boys Boys….will be boys __________________ Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha

07-22-2004, 07:11 AM	#9 (permalink)
tecoyah Illusionary	Bump Any other takers? __________________ Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha

07-22-2004, 09:17 PM	#10 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	The week's not over yet! Today I broke my writer's block! So here goes: Evil Within Although angry, in my eye lies a tear. "How could you do such a thing to me there? What caused you to do such a stupid dare? Did you think that you would impress your peer? What of these consequences you don't fear? Don't you realize you are stripping me bare? That act is costing us all that we share! Thus I stand here trembling in great despair. Why are you acting as if you don't care? You're impossible to work with, you hear? I want your sinful nature out of here! What's left to say? Have I made myself clear?" I stop yelling and in silence I stare At the face peeping back from the mirror. __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?" Last edited by ForgottenKnight; 07-22-2004 at 09:23 PM..

07-23-2004, 05:42 PM	#12 (permalink)
Ryan Crazy	I really liked what you had to share ForgottenKnight, I was able to relate to it pretty well. Thank you.

07-23-2004, 08:22 PM	#13 (permalink)
ForgottenKnight Jesus Freak Location: Following the light...	Thanks guys! All of the poems submitted for the weekly workouts are great! Lets keep up the fantastic writing! __________________ "People say I'm strange, does that make me a stranger?"