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xray21 · 07-15-2004, 07:53 PM

I think about life
Not knowing where Im going
Kinda Knowing where I have been
Looking for another road
One with more plains and not so many hills
I THINK!!
I stared death in the eye..
I won!!
Dont have a dad
Im doing fine
Moms a drunk
Im doing fine
Brothers in prison
Im doing fine
Or am I?
I think about life
Im all alone...
No famly by myside...
The scars on my body
Tell me like a story
Im not doing fine
I took the wrong exit
Im on the wrong road.......
Yet I wont take another exit...

skullfunk · 07-15-2004, 09:02 PM

I like it. You actually use literary techniques, unlike some of the poems in this forum.

xray21 · 07-15-2004, 10:00 PM

Thank u brother..
I just write and how it comes out it comes out..

07-15-2004, 07:53 PM	#1 (permalink)
xray21 Tilted Location: Oregon	Thats My Life I think about life Not knowing where Im going Kinda Knowing where I have been Looking for another road One with more plains and not so many hills I THINK!! I stared death in the eye.. I won!! Dont have a dad Im doing fine Moms a drunk Im doing fine Brothers in prison Im doing fine Or am I? I think about life Im all alone... No famly by myside... The scars on my body Tell me like a story Im not doing fine I took the wrong exit Im on the wrong road....... Yet I wont take another exit... __________________ Blessed By Pain

07-15-2004, 10:00 PM	#3 (permalink)
xray21 Tilted Location: Oregon	Thank u brother.. I just write and how it comes out it comes out.. __________________ Blessed By Pain

07-15-2004, 09:02 PM	#2 (permalink)
skullfunk Upright Location: Michigan	I like it. You actually use literary techniques, unlike some of the poems in this forum.