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Pan poetry
Daylight slowly deadens to black
Another day past to never look back Sweat drips in and burns my eyes As the darknes envelopes blue skies Colder now creatures in bed While visions of evilness dance in their head Vampires come out seeking a nights prey From those too weak to get away Addicts get home from work and smile as they get high All the while darkness controls the sky Creatures of the night dig through garbage cans for food The moon will help them find something good But at darkness's peak All may seem bleak The sky starts to change back to light Another day starts and at least for today light has won the fight |
Interesting ....I like the full circle trip thru the night.
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Woke up at half past ten
Looked to see if you'd been home Looks like another day alone again Talking to each other on the telephone Looking out my window as I drive through town Seeing couples walking hand in hand Brought back times when you were around But now we seem to live in different a different land You keep accusing me of making life misery And I close up like a clam letting feelings drown We're together yet we live our lives so seperately The future is an unknown road we have to go down We may end or be stronger than ever It's a 50/50 shot as long as we try But blaming each other will never put us back together And love will surely die |
Sitting here thinking of you
Wondering what is left to do Do we part ways And not share our days Or do we end the madness and admit our love to each other And work to be together What do we say when we're scared of the future And what the other wants we are unsure Who do we need to become Or do we just need to get numb Do we need to bury feelings deep And not let the other see us weep Or can we find ways to open our heart And tell the other we don't want to live a part How do we move forward and show each other our love And how do we know it is enough How do we get back into each other's arms And lose ourselves in each others charms I guess it all depends on the trust we have for each other That in the end will bring us together |
I like the first poem although it seemed as if there wasn't enough talk of hope and the "light." Next you wrote of some troubling issues with love. Love is tough but I find it best to never give up on it no matter which form it comes in.
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