07-12-2004, 05:08 AM | #1 (permalink) |
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Weekly Workout 1
As this is our first attempt....lets make things relatively easy.
Pick an emotion, Tell us all how it feels. Use whatever writting form you wish.
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07-12-2004, 07:08 AM | #3 (permalink) |
Illusionary
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I very much hope this is an example of the quality we have in store in this little experiment. Well done, Quite a bit of emotion incorporated into those few lines, splendid.
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Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha |
07-12-2004, 08:04 AM | #4 (permalink) |
Illusionary
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There can be but one
Sensitive to my warmth Hidden as it is Only a singlular chance My open eyes were not enough That telling moment almost missed If not for fate I would dwell alone with a hollow companion Truly, some goddess has embraced my soul To be a tear in her eye This gift of love No other could mend the fractured face of bliss There can be only one, and she is my heart She is myself, she is all
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Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha |
07-13-2004, 10:20 AM | #6 (permalink) |
Drifting
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Location: Windy City
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I'm workin on it! It just takes a few days to get the thoughts together I'm working today, so that'll probably help spur things
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Calling from deep in the heart, from where the eyes can't see and the ears can't hear, from where the mountain trails end and only love can go... ~~~ Three Rivers Hare Krishna |
07-13-2004, 02:49 PM | #7 (permalink) |
Lennonite Priest
Location: Mansfield, Ohio USA
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Emotionless man sitting alone
Wondering what a feeling means Wondering what he does not know Sitting alone through life it seems Staring at people as the laugh and cry Wondering what they are feeling and why Wondering if ever he'll feel something before he will die Not knowing to himself he does lie For the man feels something He just won't admit His denial is still feeling something But he will claim to feel nothing cause he just can't quit
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I just love people who use the excuse "I use/do this because I LOVE the feeling/joy/happiness it brings me" and expect you to be ok with that as you watch them destroy their life blindly following. My response is, "I like to put forks in an eletrical socket, just LOVE that feeling, can't ever get enough of it, so will you let me put this copper fork in that electric socket?" |
07-14-2004, 02:42 PM | #10 (permalink) |
Illusionary
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Between my beer, and your writting....I am so very relaxed. Many thanx, that was great for visualisation.
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Holding onto anger is like grasping a hot coal with the intent of throwing it at someone else; you are the one who gets burned. - Buddha |
07-14-2004, 07:07 PM | #11 (permalink) |
Drifting
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Location: Windy City
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Check and balances
To lose one, but gain another No ecstasy without despair The taste of all, bittersweet
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Calling from deep in the heart, from where the eyes can't see and the ears can't hear, from where the mountain trails end and only love can go... ~~~ Three Rivers Hare Krishna |
07-15-2004, 08:03 PM | #12 (permalink) |
Tilted
Location: Oregon
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Life
Life in a glass So many people waiting for it to fall so they can get out They see all the stuff they want but when falls would they get out.. There so used to black and white.. They dont know how to live in color...
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07-15-2004, 10:18 PM | #13 (permalink) |
Jesus Freak
Location: Following the light...
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Excellent xray21! Everyone - You're poems are GREAT! Keep up the great writing!
I would write a post something, but I haven't broken my writer's block yet. Though I will admit that I've been partying and hangin' with friends a little too much to have any time this week to try to break it... Perhaps tomorrow, but no guarantees. I figure if you want deep emotion from me, my lit thread is full of it, but that's still not an excuse to not post my work here. I guess I just need to sit down and see what comes to me...
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