Dont Die on me...
 

Im Dieing or
Do I just want to die
Im stuck in myself
Infected suaside

The Pains to savire
I love to much
Dont leave me now
Mom I cant hold up

I just look at you
An all i can think
Is how i need more
More than ever

Your love Your touch
Dont let me go
Because Im your son
And you cant go....
I need you Love...

Wonderful sentiment, well expressed.
With spelling and grammar check this would be very nice, thanx for sharing.

Strong emotion there, very powerful, but I must agree that proper spelling would make it a bit more effective.

Good way of showing strong emotion and sentiment.

thank u guys..