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Dont Die on me...
Im Dieing or
Do I just want to die Im stuck in myself Infected suaside The Pains to savire I love to much Dont leave me now Mom I cant hold up I just look at you An all i can think Is how i need more More than ever Your love Your touch Dont let me go Because Im your son And you cant go.... I need you Love... |
Wonderful sentiment, well expressed.
With spelling and grammar check this would be very nice, thanx for sharing. |
Strong emotion there, very powerful, but I must agree that proper spelling would make it a bit more effective.
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Good way of showing strong emotion and sentiment.
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thank u guys..
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