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poem 1
couldn't think of a good title.. anyway....
for shame? for shame? weary passengers scream your name- crawl the gutters, fill with rain- walk the deserts fairest gardens watered, wrinkled, and insane. gone to greet, gone to greet your furthest thought I'd like to meet- fruits of labor so discreet- from cramped and cartoned cradles tastey sweet enough to eat. you ignore, I Implore do you know not what its for? do you know not whats in store? I take a chance and shrug commands while you lie there on the floor. my disdain, my disdain no more singing in the rain- no more lovers down the lane- wieghted wheels awake and turning make it still and I'll explain. all intent, all intent fallen hero's caged and silent- brought caprice, afraid and violent- mull and stroll all through the valley force fed through thier cold compliance. random facts, all intact from whats sour they are hacked- on the terrace corner stacked- pieces torn and thrown and sewn together now is weathered through the cracks . |
I don't know why...but my mind's voice screamed the entire thing.
Good stuff. |
Great! It has a nice flow through the whole thing. I like it. Thanks for sharing and keep up the writing!:thumbsup:
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