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analog haiku...
My universe gone
I collapse inside my pain My heart grows weaker gave my love away my thoughts were always of her i weep for my loss I stop every day and mourn my stupidity God, please forgive me He gave me the love and I was a fool with it now I am empty..... |
Nice haiku's. I really like the third one. So true in everyones sense.
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Hang in there Ana, you will be writing happy haikus before you know it. Damn well done, btw.
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Very well set, pointed and complete, excellent work
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Damn dude, that was good.
It's simple, yet effective. I'd love to see more. |
I adore haiku,
Short sweet and right to the point, Give us four more please? |
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