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Old 11-16-2004, 09:24 PM   #41 (permalink)
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I hate you for writing this.

I cannot thank you enough for writing this.

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I know that one would get you.
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Old 11-18-2004, 11:12 AM   #42 (permalink)
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Absolutely bitchin'.
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Old 11-28-2004, 07:40 PM   #43 (permalink)
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Absolutely bitchin'.
Thanks.
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Old 11-28-2004, 07:41 PM   #44 (permalink)
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Heres another one for you to enjoy. Some parts of it don't seem to flow just right to me, but, over all I like it. Hope you do to.

Deconstruct me
Reconstruct me
Transform me like Optimus fucking Prime
Change my form to change my mind
My mind
My mind
My mind is on fire
Burning toxic smoking clouds
Like me and MacLeod
There can be only one
I am the only one
The only son
Of forgotten empires
From the past present and future
There is no past
There is no future
Only this present
Wrapped up under
The tree of me
The tree of free
From the trinity
Of my myself and I
In the synagogue
Of my transindental living room
To much dust
I need a broom
Sweep away the refuse
The things I no longer need
So I can see
The colors colors burning bright
To light up this self made night
Clear out the past that never was
Leave just me
A peach
Juicy coated in fuzz
Eat my flesh
Leave just the pit
And plant my heart
So it can grow
Break its hardened shell
And lay roots
In the soil of self
Consciousness and awareness
Grow beyond my limits
From pitiful to pit to tree
My ideas seeds to fall and grow
Through my words become
A forest of one
Roots intertwined
From mine to mind
And the tree of me
Becomes the tree of we
Feeding growing
Spiritual photosynthesis
Nourishing us
With the love light
From the soul of Sol
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Old 12-03-2004, 12:48 PM   #45 (permalink)
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Only friend I have that can take my breath away with his poetry and his words...
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Old 12-04-2004, 08:16 AM   #46 (permalink)
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Good one. More upbeat than your usual stuff. I like it. Thanks for the contribution.
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Old 01-03-2005, 12:32 PM   #47 (permalink)
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More happy goodness from the mind of Seer. Hope you enjoy.

Dry Rot

Live in my head
Cause my heart is dead
And my soul is wasting away
As the dry rot settles in

My fist is clenched
Around the wrench
I used to beat on my mind
As the dry rot turns to sin

I can feel the decay
As my soul fades away
Faster every day
Dry rot eats me away

It comes at night
My chest gets tight
And breath just won't come
As the dry rot starts to spread

It clouds my mind
'Til I can't find
My way back from here
As teh dry rot fills my head

I can feel the disease
It brings my to my knees
Stronger as it feeds
Dry rot takes what it needs

I can feel the decay
As my soul fades away
Faster every day
Dry rot eats me away

Flesh and bone
Turn to stone
And crumble into dust
As dry rot wins the day

So lay me down
Into the ground
And offer up a prayer
That with me dry rot stays
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Old 01-07-2005, 05:53 PM   #48 (permalink)
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Deep, Seer...as usual. Miss you a lot hon...
You can get out of my head now. lol!
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Old 01-13-2005, 04:42 PM   #49 (permalink)
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Top notch as always. I wish I was as lyrical as you are. However, my stuff all sounds like atrocious junior high poetry about suicide. Keep up the good work.

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Old 01-14-2005, 10:41 PM   #50 (permalink)
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Top notch as always. I wish I was as lyrical as you are. However, my stuff all sounds like atrocious junior high poetry about suicide. Keep up the good work.

Veritas en Lux!
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You do much better stories then me though. You should give your hand at that again...
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Old 05-27-2005, 09:10 PM   #51 (permalink)
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Don't know what to call this one. Some times something like this slips out of me and I start to wonder about my grip on reality. Oh well, as long as the words flow again


Hello there
I'm sorry were you sleeping?
I can't help these feelings creeping
Through my mind
Something isn't right
There's an old man in the corner
And he's staring at my subconscious
And tracing out the future on my spine
So tell me
Am I really just a suitcase for a soul?
And it so I think I forgot to pack
A toothbrush and my socks
And the end days
That people think are coming
Have already left us all behind
But you missed the punch line
To the greatest joke of all time
Armageddon is just a junk food
With an add campaign from Hell
3 in the morning and I'm sitting
On the side of a broken bed
Eating moon pies
In the moon light
And talking to the dead
I like the way they listen
Taking in every word you've said
Before they eat your brains
And digest your point of view
Still I wonder if they are just hungry
And this is how zombies say their Grace
With subtle moans of devotion to the flesh
Which reminds me
Here's a breath mint
I don't think it will help
But at least I can say I tried
To help arrest the decay
That the world is undergoing
Though it's my mind that it's blowing
All away
I can't follow this train of thought
So I bought an airline ticket to meet you there
Please say that you'll follow
Cause I would hate
To be left alone
In the jungle of your family tree
I'd find a friendly crosspatch
And build myself a tree house
So I could hang around you tall the time
Ok I’ll be going
Thanks for listening
And helping me stay awake
And staving off the dream bursting from my navel
I don't want to let them near my head
I really should be going now
So I'll just show you how
And go
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Old 06-11-2005, 10:42 PM   #52 (permalink)
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Boy, that one is hard to name. I know WildLeaf came up with a great one for it. I'll be damned if I can remember what it is. It's quite a change from your usual material.

Why can there not be more than 24 hours in a day?

I'll never get anything down at my present schedule.

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Old 06-13-2005, 10:23 PM   #53 (permalink)
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I was very impressed by A Million Perspectives of Godhood and the Gallows. Quite a chilling perspective.
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Old 08-26-2005, 08:27 AM   #54 (permalink)
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Reading your work once or twice and then taking time away from it and coming back to it to reread it...it's even more incredible the 2nd time. I, for one, know that you speak from a place within you with these words and from what I've seen come forth from this part of you, I can only say that I am really looking forward to reading more and more.

Sometimes knowing about a person's life and hardships brings another person strength - it centers them a bit I think. Makes a person realize that it isn't always all about them...their false reality comes crashing down...for some, this may be dangerous, for others...like me...it's a very good thing.

Thank you, Seer. I'm lucky I know you.
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Old 09-15-2005, 02:21 AM   #55 (permalink)
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Thanks Amnesia. Glad to see it still holds impact for you, and remains enjoyable for you to read. Hopefuly I'll have something new for you to read soon.
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Old 08-22-2007, 05:42 AM   #56 (permalink)
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Well, after spending most the year to depressed to be able to write, I've managed to come up with some new work. I thought some nerdcore would be a nice change of pace for this one..

A Transistor sister
Who could resist her
A high tech babe
that likes Crisco Twister
Like DOS, you know I really miss her
My circuits melt
Every time I kissed her

She'll give up sleep
For a chance to roll play
She likes Halo
And tattoos of anime
A sheik freak
That likes to surf Think Geek
She likes her fish raw
And her sex Greek

She's got a cat
She shaved and named Choo Choo Bear
When we're home alone she gets naked
And does the Care Bear Stare
She'll go old school
And sing Step in Time
To get her wet just
Mention Optimus Prime
She'll give you head
With a mouth full of Pop Rocks
Her tongues so good
man, you know she Groks

Sci_fi all day
Tolken cosplay
She'd call me Frankie
And then she'd do it my way
She fits so tight
Like a glove on O.J.
Sweating to the oldies
in bed all day

Now she's gone
Roaming like a cell phone
No idea if she' ever coming home
Waiting here sitting all alone
Like a newb who just got pwnd

A Transistor sister
Who could resist her
A high tech babe
that likes Crisco Twister
A transistor Sister
You know I really miss her

And another one. A bit more in line with the rest of my work.

Blame it on Daddy

There's a clock that keeps ticking
Every day inside my head
Counting up the minutes
Sense I first wished I was dead
I look around he living room
Fo something I haven't read
Anything to avoid
The angry thoughts inside my head

Light another cigarette
See you picture through the smoke
I think of all the lies we had
And it makes me want to choke
As I hide myself away from
The eye of well intentioned folk
See the pieces of my heart
Mixed with the promises you broke

Daddy didn't want you no we all are going to pay
And every man that meets you will come to rue the day
These cheating ways have got to end
That's no way to treat a friend
And though you've done it all before
I never once considered you a whore
But what you do is what I'll call
And it pains me so to see you fall

Disconnected from the world
Like a switch was flipped inside
Mildly disturbed
By empty thoughts of suicide
I up end another bottle
20 more lay on their side
The alcohol preserves the pain
But it keeps it liked inside

I always put your needs first
The problem was so did you
And the anger that I feel inside
Seems like the only thing that's true
I just wish i could hate you
As I try to ride this through
But instead I feel this pity
For the thing you've turned into

Daddy didn't want you no we all are going to pay
And every man that meets you will come to rue the day
These cheating ways have got to end
That's no way to treat a friend
And though you've done it all before
I never once considered you a whore
But what you do is what I'll call
And it pains me so to see you fall
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Old 08-24-2007, 09:40 AM   #57 (permalink)
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Love reading your work...you're a mastermind at all you place down for us to read. I miss you daily, and think of you often. I'm happy to know you personally, and even happier that you are my friend. Much love to you, Seer.
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