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Esen 04-06-2004 06:52 PM

No longer
 
You shave at my soul
taking the carvings with you
tuckered bare, the roots fall withered and soiled
desperate is the need,
silent is the treatment
craving is the thirst
naked is your blade
Nourishment
deprived
now uprooted left raw and bleeding
Pleading,
leave my leaves alone,
brown and withered chilled and slithered
stems uncanny.
and you the one who cuts and chops
leaving the soul confused and chanting,
recover me
all that was green is now flawed and red
turned into your timber burning away my happiness,
dryed discarded dead

Mephex 04-08-2004 09:42 AM

Wow, very impressive. I can read that over and over and get a different feeling each time. Thanks for sharing.

ForgottenKnight 04-12-2004 08:08 PM

Very Good! I really like it! Thanks for sharing!

ariekitten 04-18-2004 01:55 AM

its amazing......each thread i click on reveals something new and wonderful....a part of the person who posted, and though i already knew the the members here were amazing individuals, im seeing it more and more just by reading their works.

thank you so much for sharing. that was incredibly beautiful....and tear inducing....*sigh*

vonstalhein 04-21-2004 06:02 AM

I love the carpentry theme!


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