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CS733t · 03-21-2004, 06:24 PM

Pain begets pain

Talk about it, it revives
Think about it, it relives
Hear about it, it returns
Cry about it, it regresses
Sing about it, it reuses
Write about it, it regrets

Forget about it, it releases

Mephex · 03-22-2004, 11:53 AM

Wow, loved it. Thanks for sharing.

vonstalhein · 03-23-2004, 01:08 PM

ALl good apart from 'reuses' which was perhaps a bit tenuous? Can't say i didn't like the ending sentiment though. I'll go one better and say i did actually. Nice work.

03-21-2004, 06:24 PM	#1 (permalink)
CS733t Crazy	Pain Pain begets pain Talk about it, it revives Think about it, it relives Hear about it, it returns Cry about it, it regresses Sing about it, it reuses Write about it, it regrets Forget about it, it releases __________________ So tired now of paying my dues I start out strong but then I always lose It's half the distance before you leave me behind It's such a waste of time

03-23-2004, 01:08 PM	#3 (permalink)
vonstalhein Insane Location: Where You Live.	ALl good apart from 'reuses' which was perhaps a bit tenuous? Can't say i didn't like the ending sentiment though. I'll go one better and say i did actually. Nice work. __________________ No Win No Fee

03-22-2004, 11:53 AM	#2 (permalink)
Mephex Psycho	Wow, loved it. Thanks for sharing.