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VF19 · 03-07-2004, 01:41 PM

I am pretty bored today, so I think ill take my shot at a story.
This is before Eru, the 'god', appeared in Middle Earth.

Ok, so I name lands by the landmark near them, such as the Sec river, Naz forest, and Bof forest.

This is just to give you a taste of it.

And I pass like 1000-2000 years in the first two paragraphs.

Tell me what you think, if its good, ill write more.

Quote:

Long ago, before any God set foot upon this World, there was Aerot. A land that rose from the
green seas, called Aerot, widthstood many a year until Men and Trees and other beasts appeared
to inhabit it. Yes, from the eaves of the Naz forest came Men. Men to live, build, and cultivate
the lands.

At first few men were able to cope with the cold, the hunger, and the cruel beasts that attacked
them. Yet their number grew, and soon many villages and towns were built from the trees of
Naz. Some, such as Yosidies I, leader of the great town of Hyunne, formed alliances with other
towns and soon he ruled a great empire. Yet some townships far away did not ally with him.

Far away a people known as the Sec people, dwelling by the Sec river, refused to join Yosidies I
and his empire. Yosidies I himself led an army of 2,500 to Jymarus (main city of Sec people)
yet many had already fled and settled the Led valley and far away south by the Bof forest.
Yosidies continued to rule both Naz and Sec for 21 more years, and his son after that.

And what of the Sec people who fled? Those who settled the Bof forest were killed by Evil beasts
from the Southern Deserts. None escaped alive. Those in the Led valley found it hard to live on
the icy ground and cold winters. They returned to Sec, and later to Bof. What occured there is next.

labeled map, I have some really great drawn ones, but I havent a scanner.

no labels

thanks in advance.

vonstalhein · 03-09-2004, 10:57 AM

er...sounds promising. Map work is interesting...Not really a lot to comment on is there?

losthellhound · 03-09-2004, 01:05 PM

I would be interested in reading more, it has alot of promise

03-09-2004, 10:57 AM	#2 (permalink)
vonstalhein Insane Location: Where You Live.	er...sounds promising. Map work is interesting...Not really a lot to comment on is there? __________________ No Win No Fee

03-09-2004, 01:05 PM	#3 (permalink)
losthellhound Thats MR. Muffin Face now Location: Everywhere work sends me	I would be interested in reading more, it has alot of promise __________________ "Life is possible only with illusions. And so, the question for the science of mental health must become an absolutely new and revolutionary one, yet one that reflects the essence of the human condition: On what level of illusion does one live?" -- Ernest Becker, The Denial of Death