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scarebearjinx · 03-04-2004, 02:35 PM

far away
forever gone
the past unseen
it comes undone

reveal the beauty
watch in pain
a memory forgotten
lost in vain

a swirl of black
a glimmer of green
stained with blood
i feel unclean

when all is gone
the worlds amiss
i take this blade
i slice my wrist

the blood drips down
i feel the pain
i smile with delight
am i insane

the crime is done
and i'm awake
a feeling of pleasure
only i can make

everlasting hell
the cuts are clean
no more to worry
nothing is seen

scarebearjinx · 03-04-2004, 09:18 PM

i do apologize if they are a bit depressing or something. i just tend to write exactly what comes to mind.

mastboyx · 03-06-2004, 01:35 PM

oh I realy like what u write, i know u dont write for other people to like them but I do and they are great

vonstalhein · 03-07-2004, 02:26 AM

i liked it until the slicy wrist bit.

03-04-2004, 02:35 PM	#1 (permalink)
scarebearjinx Psycho Location: in a deep, dark hole where rainbow creatures attack me to eat my fingernails.	random poems far away forever gone the past unseen it comes undone reveal the beauty watch in pain a memory forgotten lost in vain a swirl of black a glimmer of green stained with blood i feel unclean when all is gone the worlds amiss i take this blade i slice my wrist the blood drips down i feel the pain i smile with delight am i insane the crime is done and i'm awake a feeling of pleasure only i can make everlasting hell the cuts are clean no more to worry nothing is seen

03-06-2004, 01:35 PM	#3 (permalink)
mastboyx Insane Location: Mexico	oh I realy like what u write, i know u dont write for other people to like them but I do and they are great __________________ Ignorance Is Bliss

03-07-2004, 02:26 AM	#4 (permalink)
vonstalhein Insane Location: Where You Live.	i liked it until the slicy wrist bit. __________________ No Win No Fee

03-04-2004, 09:18 PM	#2 (permalink)
scarebearjinx Psycho Location: in a deep, dark hole where rainbow creatures attack me to eat my fingernails.	i do apologize if they are a bit depressing or something. i just tend to write exactly what comes to mind.