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Beauty
I see beauty everywhere I look, but I can never seem to touch it.
Instead, it only seems to touch me. I wish I could lose myself in it. I wish I could run off with it. I wish I could just stare at it. Would it then get old? Would I find new beauty in something else? Could it run out? I see beauty everywhere I look, but I can not define it. Instead, it seems to define me. In places I do not see beauty, ugliness protrudes. I hate it. I don’t want it. I want to change it. People say if you look hard enough, one can find beauty in anything. Instead, I look at nothing. Are they dreamers? What do they know, I do not? Is beauty in the eye of the beholder? I see beauty everywhere I look, but it doesn’t seem right. Instead, it is tarnished by the ugliness next to it. I fear it. I don’t want to look away. I can’t do anything about it. Should I not look? Should I compare the two? Should I not care? Beauty is everywhere you look. I see it in you. I see it in me. I will learn to see it where I do not. |
very nice, thank you for sharing.. Its very conflicted too which is good..
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Would I find new beauty in something else?
Could it run out? i think that is the best and most poignant two lines of the poem. Try turning it into the worst by writing 10 better ones. I reckon you could! |
Glad that beauty is showing itself to you! Good poem. Thanks for sharing!
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