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losthellhound 02-13-2004 11:28 AM

more hound's poetry - Reqium
 
Wrote this a LONG time ago, thought it would enjoy seeing the light of day

Reqium
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I heard music for an hour
I felt warmth for a minute
I held life in my hands for a second
I breathed once

ForgottenKnight 02-14-2004 10:41 PM

I like that. Thanks for sharing.

taliendo 02-15-2004 12:22 AM

All of experience is at best fading - sometimes its good to capture a moment every now and again.

Send out more stuff; there can never be enough voices in the world.

vonstalhein 02-15-2004 04:50 AM

I don't understand it. Yet, perhaps because of this i like it more, nice and cryptic. Nice.

losthellhound 02-16-2004 09:02 AM

Thank you very much

J.R.V.A. 02-20-2004 07:49 AM

Very good, it made me feel..... I don't know, it just kinda hit me. Thank you

losthellhound 02-20-2004 08:45 AM

Thanks J.R.V.A. I cant remember when or why I wrote it, but I know something bad had just happened..

Mephex 02-20-2004 09:06 AM

Wow something so simple, and yet it could apply to so many things. Thanks for that, it's a lot of fun !

I mean, it could relate to birth, suicide, death in general, really interesting.


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