Golgothas

I've got a website that features a poorly written story that I'm working on. Don't know if this would be considered sitewhoring and unapproved, if it is, I'll take the thread down asap!

Just follow the episodes link on the blog.

http://golgo.seretogis.org/

If you enjoy it or hate it, well, I guess I'd like feedback either way. I might very likely do another rewrite again after a few more phases to make things more coeherent and, well, not suck =P