a ridiculous haiku
 

If you have the time
could you please pass the butter
my toast is so dry.

Creative!

I hate to break it to you, but that's not technically a Haiku. Haikus are technically about nature. When it's not about nature, it's called something else (similar name), but I forget what it's called. I guess it doesn't really matter, since everyone only knows them as haikus anyways. Just thought I'd let you know.

I see butterflies
why aren't they good on toast
they are so crunchy


Is that better? butterflies are nature :)

:lol: Are butterflies good on anything? :lol:

the grass is long, damp
it stands so straight, tall and proud
I must cut it now

Ah, nature.....breathe deep
the fury of my loins grows
I must go pee now

How are those NiceGuy? Better? Trying to stay within the technical specifications of Haiku :D

:lol: Those are funny! I don't think you need to stay within the technical specifications as long as you have fun writing it! I do enjoy reading it!