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Zamunda 01-20-2004 04:06 PM

a love poem about hookups
 
New Years
A night to end all nights
And begin the rest
A celebration…

Of hair
So golden and fair
Radiating the beauty
Of her mind

Of eyes
Droplets of a green sea
Firmly shielding her thoughts
Delicately hunting her prey

Of lips
So full and red
Like satin pillows
On which to rest his troubled head

Of hands
Small yet wistful
Giving a blissful touch
Of pleasure or desire

Of love
The kind of love that stays
For minutes, hours, days
Or seconds

Yes, New Years is a celebration
Of that kind of love
Which goes nowhere
And stays everywhere

vonstalhein 01-21-2004 07:28 AM

I liked the structure, but it's a bit luvvy-duvvy for me!

Zamunda 01-21-2004 09:40 AM

i know, I only wrote it for this stanza
Of love
The kind of love that stays
For minutes, hours, days
Or seconds

J.R.V.A. 02-07-2004 11:41 AM

Love is....... All these things...

losthellhound 02-07-2004 03:09 PM

My favorite as well

Quote:

Originally posted by Zamunda
i know, I only wrote it for this stanza
Of love
The kind of love that stays
For minutes, hours, days
Or seconds



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