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fallen_angel 01-07-2004 02:20 PM

short thoughts
 
You are the fading memory
That my mind cannot forget
The taste that lingers on my tongue
A caress that brands the skin
Your movements are like shadows
Dancing in my mind
Moving the gentle breeze
Into a hurricane of despair
Bringing the scent of loss and sorrow to the air

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Make believine isnt hard alone
Niether are drying the tears I've never shown
These are just the things that happen
When I am reminded of you
As I close my eyes so I can be with you
All of my memories are too painful to forget
They are the stains on my soul
Melting my wings
As I become one with the sun

ForgottenKnight 01-07-2004 10:16 PM

Again, beautiful work.

I really like these lines:
Quote:

Originally posted by fallen_angel
Moving the gentle breeze
Into a hurricane of despair
Bringing the scent of loss and sorrow to the air




riptide4070 01-13-2004 08:10 PM

memories of past love can hurt. My pains usually come back whenever I see a picture of my lost love smiling.

fallen_angel 01-14-2004 10:01 AM

I see mine everyday in class. Its hard not to look or stare but sometimes its all i can do to stay sane.

J.R.V.A. 02-07-2004 10:13 AM

You write very beautifully


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